New Year's Resolutions

NEW   YEAR'S   RESOLUTIONS


Hot air balloons – that’s resolutions
Large and attractive, impressive to begin
You rise with upturned gaze and jutted chin
And filled with hopeful expectations
      
They can  last for months or send 
You  on an odyssey  without   end
They can help you over obstacles with ease
Carry you safe across troubled seas
But you’ve got to keep them refueled
Got to steer them away from being cooled
Don’t let them be punctured by actions careless  
Don’t tire of watching their progress.
Glory in their possibilities, admire their shape
Their ascent has  limitless scope.
You may rise further than you ever thought,
See things you never dreamed or sought

Reach for the limits of your being while up there.
Real things, not pie-in-the-sky.
Resolutions  can be almost anything you try.
Or they can simply be hot air.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 1/3/2011 6:54:00 AM
oh I love it, congrats on your first place win
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Date: 12/31/2010 7:21:00 PM
Many congratulations Sydney on your big one. A worthy poem in your honered win. Agape, Moses
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Date: 12/31/2010 11:41:00 AM
Exceptional write, Sydney. Congratulations on your great Ist Place Win in Carolyn's contest! Happy New Year! Always, Audrey
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Date: 12/31/2010 9:02:00 AM
Congrats on a well deserved 1st place win with this gem, Sydney! Dan C
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Date: 12/31/2010 4:47:00 AM
I am only makeing one resolution this year and I hope I keep it. Here is is. Try the six week body makeover for six weeks! Then, take it from there. I hope I stick to it and that it is not just hot air! I am going to favorite your poem to refer to during those 6 weeks. Thanks and congratulations on winning.
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Date: 12/31/2010 2:26:00 AM
a blazing write, sydney.. CONGRATS on the award! huggs, nette
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Date: 12/30/2010 5:13:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 12/30/2010 1:29:00 PM
What a terrific read and a well deserved 1st.place win.Teresa
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Date: 12/30/2010 10:21:00 AM
Congrats Sydney on your well deserved win.
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Date: 12/30/2010 10:20:00 AM
This is fabulous! You really deserved your first-place win, Sydney. Have a happy New Year!
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Date: 12/30/2010 9:23:00 AM
LCongratulations on your big win with this "lofty" entry. Love, Joyce
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Date: 12/30/2010 8:34:00 AM
Yes, indeed, that last line sums it up beautifully!! Well done, Sydney!! Congratulations on your first place win!!! Love, Carrie
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Date: 12/30/2010 7:44:00 AM
Carolyn picked a great piece for number 1..congrats..a great idea to compare the balloon to resolutions. BG
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Date: 12/30/2010 7:05:00 AM
Terrific!! Love the sentiment and moral in this one. Also, easy to read, easy to understand and nice flow, rhyme and meter. Just a terrific write. Loved it. Joe
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Date: 12/30/2010 6:17:00 AM
Wonderful poem congrats on a deserved winner in the contest. Harry
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Date: 12/30/2010 6:15:00 AM
Happy new year and congratulations on this well deserv ed first place win, Sydney
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Date: 12/30/2010 5:48:00 AM
Congratulations Sydney on your win in Carolyn Devonshire's "New Year's Resolutions". contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/30/2010 4:24:00 AM
I resolve to read more of your poetry! Easy enough to keep, a pleasure, congratulations!
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Date: 12/30/2010 2:31:00 AM
Outstanding, Sydney. So creative and original. Congratulations on your first-place win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/20/2010 1:50:00 PM
:) Definitely not too long, Syd. Thanks so much for supporting the contest. Have a wonderful Christmas! Love, Carolyn
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