Nevermind Number Nine

Rounded up
Forgotten pup
No hourglass shape
Like sister eight
Denied the pluck
Of seven's luck
No flashy tricks
For clever six
Lacking the vibe
Of cool kid five
Awkward score
No balanced four
Craves symmetry
Family of three
Alone and blue
Unlike cute two
While ten and one
Have all the fun
Eleven stays
Aloofly away
Twelve is far
Too popular
And all the teens
Have their own scenes
So, find time for nine
In your counting rhymes!

4/10/21

Anacreontic Verse contest
Sponsor: Silent One
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Faulkner Avatar
June 25, 2022 at 5:21 PM
A belated thank you to everyone who commented and entered my nine contest, I appreciate all of you very much!
Faulkner Avatar
November 22, 2021 at 10:49 AM
Thank you!
Morgan Avatar
October 15, 2021 at 9:10 PM
Very fun poem enjoyed!
Balasubramanian Avatar
July 30, 2021 at 8:26 AM
Congratulations. You rhymed it too. Not easy. Great topic chosen.
Y. Avatar
July 29, 2021 at 3:00 PM
WoW! Michelle, You deserve every accolade you have gotten from this well-written write. Congratulations on your win. Have a great day:-) Alexis
Pandit Avatar
July 29, 2021 at 2:25 PM
Back with Congrats, Michelle, on your win in Silent's contest.
One Avatar
July 29, 2021 at 6:52 AM
Sorry, I've not been around.. Not much free time at the moment, and that means not enough time for Poetry Soup... Thank you for writing for my contest and apologies it took so long to judge.. Congratulations on your placement...
Faulkner Avatar
July 29, 2021 at 12:20 PM
Thank you for the placement, it is very much appreciated~
Dutta Avatar
May 14, 2021 at 8:57 PM
Enjoyed and 'll try your contest. Blessings
Edmonds  Avatar
May 12, 2021 at 9:06 AM
What a wonderful write, very clever and so deserved getting poem of the day. Your contest has brought me here Michelle and I’m glad it did… Belle
Peck Avatar
April 24, 2021 at 9:29 AM
Yes, the shy one. I love the way you write So beautifully direct, so much meaning.
Proxenos Avatar
April 24, 2021 at 12:41 AM
Hi Michelle, if you are upset with me I do understand but I am the world's worst for keeping up with competitions and POTD but this one deserves an extra special great, awesome, creative, brilliant. Sorry Michelle - congratulations on POTD, so glad it was given to you for this poem. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Laurie Avatar
April 18, 2021 at 9:54 PM
Hello Michelle ... really enjoyable to read and you left me with a smile - thank you Michelle - Lindsay
Gauthier Avatar
April 18, 2021 at 3:05 PM
Delightful rhyme, Michelle. Congrats on your POTD !
Radhakrishna Avatar
April 17, 2021 at 1:41 PM
Michelle, this is so well done! Congrats on a well deserved POTD!!
Michael Avatar
April 17, 2021 at 6:37 AM
I like that phrase, "Nevermind Number Nine" the dance of numbers...Congratulations Michelle Faulkner on POTD.
Kendrick Avatar
April 16, 2021 at 3:09 AM
Way to go in this one. Congrats on POTD. I don't think this kind of poem would be easy to write but you have done an excellent job. Your visit to my page was inspiriting. Sara
Seeker Avatar
April 12, 2021 at 9:58 PM
Clever and lively one! Congrats on POTD, Michelle!
Faulkner Avatar
April 13, 2021 at 4:45 PM
Thank you very much (not sure how to address you, is it Unseeking? U.S? just curious!)
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 12, 2021 at 8:46 PM
Clever and cute Michelle. I see why it was honored with POTD! Congratulations! Blessings xxoo
Faulkner Avatar
April 13, 2021 at 4:44 PM
Blessings to you also, thanks for commenting, Connie~
Roper Avatar
April 12, 2021 at 6:50 PM
Congratulations on POTD, Michelle.
Faulkner Avatar
April 13, 2021 at 4:44 PM
Appreciate it, thank you, Eve~
Hirtle Avatar
April 12, 2021 at 6:01 PM
This clever verse had me feeling sorrowful for the slighted nine. Well done!
Faulkner Avatar
April 13, 2021 at 4:43 PM
I always felt it was overlooked, thank you for your comment, Jim~
Rodrigues Avatar
April 12, 2021 at 5:28 PM
Congratulations on POTD, Michelle!
Faulkner Avatar
April 13, 2021 at 4:43 PM
Thank you so much, Kim~
Ashley Avatar
April 12, 2021 at 5:07 PM
Dear Michelle, your creative genius adorns this clever poem to the nines! Your fanciful pen captivates and charms my appreciative imagination and touches my heart.. the "Forgotten pup" - so evocative and emotive! Smooth as silk too! Congratulations, my dear friend, for your wonderful recognition with POTD honors. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you.. ~Susan
Faulkner Avatar
April 13, 2021 at 4:43 PM
Thank you for your kind wishes and encouraging words, as always, my friend, they warm my heart~
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 12, 2021 at 3:38 PM
Hello Michelle congrad on your win.
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 14, 2021 at 11:06 AM
Hello Michelle, you are welcome my friend. Enjoy your day.
Faulkner Avatar
April 13, 2021 at 4:42 PM
Thank you very much, Darlene~
Kitchin Avatar
April 12, 2021 at 12:22 PM
Congratulations on POTD Michelle, a fun one!
Faulkner Avatar
April 13, 2021 at 4:42 PM
Thanks, Tania, glad you liked it!
Mchattie Avatar
April 12, 2021 at 11:22 AM
The creative juices were flowing on this one. Well penned. Congrats on POTD. Have a great day.
Faulkner Avatar
April 13, 2021 at 4:41 PM
The juice was loose, for sure! Thanks for your comment~
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