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Never Let You Down

Never let you down When your world... comes crashing down.... you don't feel strong enough... to throw all your fears away... You've had enough... of life's sorrows And you don't think, you'll live...to see another day I'll be there for you... even if there's no one else around Chorus You'll know that I'm...there for you Like a life guard, who's watching ...over you.. I won't let you down... never gonna let you drown. When you're tired and scared... feeling all alone... imprisoned by your fears... and courage seems...so...far away hope fades...while tears roll down... I'll be there right beside you dear... you know...I'll be there for you Chorus You'll know that I'm...there for you Like a life guard, who's watching ...over you.. I won't let you down... never gonna let you drown. When waves of grief... keep crashing down... and, you're holding on for dear life all you can do is pray... to make it through this day you know that I'm there for you always there to comfort you... Chorus You'll know that I'm...there for you Like a life guard, who's watching ...over you.. I won't let you down... never gonna let you drown. I'll be there, night and day for you I'll never let you down, no, no, never gonna let you drown I'll be there, night and day for you I'll never let you down, no, no, never gonna let you drown repeat and fade John Derek Hamilton October 3,2017

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Date: 10/22/2017 5:24:00 AM
The one value that I place above all others - Loyalty! Not blind loyalty, for true loyalty is not something you can expect by right of proxy, but earned Loyalty; once someone has "earned" loyalty they can rightful expect to forever receive it. True loyalty is the genuine stamp of an individual who is both worthy and uncompromising in his or her values; their tremendously strong will and spirit sustains them throughout despite what others may threaten or demand - they are the rock of mountains!
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John Hamilton
Date: 10/22/2017 8:16:00 AM
I agree 100 percent John, loyalty is sadly lacking in many relationships. Thanks for your insightful and encouraging comments, I am honored by your kind visit!
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John Fleming
Date: 10/22/2017 5:25:00 AM
Great write, John! My very warmest regards. :) john
Date: 10/17/2017 9:42:00 AM
Lovely Lyric. Wish to listen to music.
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John Hamilton
Date: 10/17/2017 1:35:00 PM
Yes Anisha you and me both, one day...one day. Thanks for the nice visit and comment!
Date: 10/16/2017 11:57:00 PM
I really like this one, John. Is there some music for it? Would love to hear it.
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John Hamilton
Date: 10/17/2017 1:34:00 PM
Not yet still looking for a composer for my lyrics, I've been disappointed by 2 lately who say the are working on it but after a year I think I'm moving on to find others who are serious about commitment. Thanks Carol
Date: 10/10/2017 11:47:00 PM
This is gorgeous, Brother, and I love the refrain ... superb lyric writing and beautiful phrasing and structure ... love this, my friend!
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John Hamilton
Date: 10/11/2017 11:12:00 AM
Thanks Greg, I am glad you passed by on this one, it's a poor mans attempt to rise to the challenge that is Simon and Garfunkle, glad you enjoyed it, hope it brings comfort to some!
Date: 10/10/2017 12:46:00 AM
wow! what an excellently written poem. i enjoyed reading this gem of yours. Thanks for sharing.
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John Hamilton
Date: 10/10/2017 2:30:00 PM
Thanks Afolabi I am thankful for your nice visit, and generous comment!
Date: 10/7/2017 5:53:00 AM
What a beautiful song this will be sung to a guitar accompaniment . Great and meaningful words John, i love it...Maria
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John Hamilton
Date: 10/7/2017 12:44:00 PM
Thanks so much Maria, I tried to follow the spirit of bridge over troubled water, hopefully I succeeded, I do appreciate your nice visit and positive comments!
Date: 10/6/2017 10:45:00 PM
This is beautiful, John. I really think this would make an amazing song. Lovely and meaningful words.
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John Hamilton
Date: 10/7/2017 12:42:00 PM
Thanks so much Becca, it would be a dream come true if someone would put music to this, I appreciate your positive feedback, and friendly visit!
Date: 10/5/2017 4:38:00 PM
John, this is a completely amazing song. Reading your lyrics was like being wrapped in a warm hug. Your song lyrics was a soft place for me to fall into this afternoon. Enjoyed!
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John Hamilton
Date: 10/5/2017 10:59:00 PM
Thanks Susan, what a nice thing to say, that was the intent, to make people feel comforted, I feel good now, your comment made my night!
Date: 10/5/2017 8:40:00 AM
Beautiful write based on the song John..best wishes..
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John Hamilton
Date: 10/5/2017 12:25:00 PM
Thanks Joseph, I tried to match the spirit of the song, glad you liked it, thanks for your visit!
Date: 10/4/2017 3:27:00 PM
A very encouraging piece. Thanks for your visit and thoughtful comment. All is well, super busy but well!
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John Hamilton
Date: 10/4/2017 3:44:00 PM
Thanks Rick, glad to have you pass by, have you read Greg Barden's latest poem about his father? Had me in tears, I know you relate!Have a great day!
Date: 10/4/2017 3:06:00 PM
Have you set up a youtube channel yet singing these songs? Great example John.
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John Hamilton
Date: 10/4/2017 3:42:00 PM
Thanks SO! No, I'm an okay singer, I'm more a lyricist, the music takes so long for me as I don't play guitar or piano, hence my Bernie Taupin and Elton John poem more accurately reflects my situation. Thanks for the kind words, as you know Simon and Garfunkle are the best!
Date: 10/4/2017 9:37:00 AM
Beautiful song John, comforting and calming.
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John Hamilton
Date: 10/4/2017 2:34:00 PM
Thanks Cecilia, nice to have a visit from you, been a while, thanks for the nice comment!
Date: 10/3/2017 5:19:00 PM
A lovely model for us. It might be interesting to try it as a song lyric!! Thanks for sharing!
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John Hamilton
Date: 10/3/2017 5:41:00 PM
Thanks Andrea looking forward to your entry!
Date: 10/3/2017 4:53:00 PM
Enjoyed reading the lyrics--!
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John Hamilton
Date: 10/3/2017 4:58:00 PM
Thanks Vijay
Date: 10/3/2017 4:24:00 PM
Very nice and comforting John! :)
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John Hamilton
Date: 10/3/2017 4:35:00 PM
Thanks Heidi, I just added another verse, thanks for the nice first comment!

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