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Never Forgotten

Cottonwood snowcaps blowing in the breeze fluffs of white flutter, filling a distant history closed eyes filter out tiny drops of salted sea Time, lost along with another passing season misted moments mixed with lavender essence dropped down in a canyon of heartfelt misery A fervent haze rises across the baked horizon burning deep visions of succulent lips waiting on honey dipped words to melt frozen moments -never forgotten

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Date: 6/17/2017 9:35:00 AM
Hello friend. Its been a while. LORD! This is just vintage you! Excellent, Awesome and a master in this covetous craft of writing. Keep on flowing the ink of your mind. A 7 for sure.
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Date: 6/14/2017 12:18:00 PM
Such great metaphors used here. It appeals to the senses. Great write :)
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Date: 6/13/2017 3:10:00 AM
this is truly succulent a verse, Tim! it appealed to my senses, thanks for that and kudos to you!! :)
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Date: 6/12/2017 10:24:00 PM
Pleasure to read such lovely verse. xoxoxo
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Date: 6/12/2017 11:35:00 AM
And I haven't forgotten you, my friend...great verse Tim...hope all is good...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 6/12/2017 11:18:00 AM
Hello Tim. Yes, you are the poet here in this entry. I found this entry to be traditional and poetry in the truest fashion. It reads beautifully with well chosen words. May this day find you well. Wonderful in its entirety.
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Date: 6/12/2017 8:24:00 AM
That last line is a piece of art. It completes this beautiful sentimental write.
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Date: 6/12/2017 12:24:00 AM
I can never figure out if never forgotten is a blessing or a curse, lovely poem!
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Date: 6/11/2017 10:47:00 PM
inviting views are never forgotten ~*
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Date: 6/11/2017 2:47:00 PM
So beautiful my friend. Great alliteration there, and the sadness is palpable. Hugs!
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Date: 6/11/2017 2:17:00 PM
some meaningful moments never leave the heart, sullen or not... lovely write, tim... huggs
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Date: 6/11/2017 9:20:00 AM
The last line -perfect! A sad poem Tim yet so well written that it makes me smile :)
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Date: 6/11/2017 4:59:00 AM
Wow Tim....this is a moving beauty with a poignancy that lingers in the mind. 7 ; )
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Date: 6/10/2017 6:40:00 PM
"Time,lost along with another passing season" This is the reason I like this poem. You know me, I love sad poems.
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Date: 6/10/2017 5:13:00 PM
I share all of your sentiments, Tim. Those misted moments bring about tiny teardrops as from the salted sea. A melancholy write.
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Date: 6/10/2017 4:52:00 PM
Love this Tim! A favorite :)
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Date: 6/10/2017 4:47:00 PM
what wonderful poetic memories Tim... one day she will return! love the alliteration in the 2nd stanza :-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 6/10/2017 4:20:00 PM
- Lovely poem, Tim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/10/2017 3:54:00 PM
This is poignant. It's also sincere and beautiful. Nicely done.
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