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Never Forgotten

Cottonwood snowcaps blowing in the breeze
fluffs of white flutter, filling a distant history
closed eyes filter out tiny drops of salted sea

Time, lost along with another passing season
misted moments mixed with lavender essence
dropped down in a canyon of heartfelt misery

A fervent haze rises across the baked horizon 
burning deep visions of succulent lips waiting
on honey dipped words to melt frozen moments 

-never forgotten

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Funom Makama

Date: 6/17/2017 9:35:00 AM

Hello friend. Its been a while. LORD! This is just vintage you! Excellent, Awesome and a master in this covetous craft of writing. Keep on flowing the ink of your mind. A 7 for sure.

Sunita U.D Palawon

Date: 6/14/2017 12:18:00 PM

Such great metaphors used here. It appeals to the senses. Great write :)

Hija De La Luna

Date: 6/13/2017 3:10:00 AM

this is truly succulent a verse, Tim! it appealed to my senses, thanks for that and kudos to you!! :)

Aurore Severo

Date: 6/12/2017 10:24:00 PM

Pleasure to read such lovely verse. xoxoxo

Winged Warrior

Date: 6/12/2017 11:35:00 AM

And I haven't forgotten you, my friend...great verse Tim...hope all is good...god bless...^WW^

Lisa Ricci

Date: 6/12/2017 11:18:00 AM

Hello Tim. Yes, you are the poet here in this entry. I found this entry to be traditional and poetry in the truest fashion. It reads beautifully with well chosen words. May this day find you well. Wonderful in its entirety.