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Never Forgotten

Cottonwood snowcaps blowing in the breeze fluffs of white flutter, filling a distant history closed eyes filter out tiny drops of salted sea Time, lost along with another passing season misted moments mixed with lavender essence dropped down in a canyon of heartfelt misery A fervent haze rises across the baked horizon burning deep visions of succulent lips waiting on honey dipped words to melt frozen moments -never forgotten

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Funom Makama

Date: 6/17/2017 9:35:00 AM

Hello friend. Its been a while. LORD! This is just vintage you! Excellent, Awesome and a master in this covetous craft of writing. Keep on flowing the ink of your mind. A 7 for sure.

Sunita U.D Palawon

Date: 6/14/2017 12:18:00 PM

Such great metaphors used here. It appeals to the senses. Great write :)

Hija De La Luna

Date: 6/13/2017 3:10:00 AM

this is truly succulent a verse, Tim! it appealed to my senses, thanks for that and kudos to you!! :)

Aurore Severo

Date: 6/12/2017 10:24:00 PM

Pleasure to read such lovely verse. xoxoxo

Winged Warrior

Date: 6/12/2017 11:35:00 AM

And I haven't forgotten you, my friend...great verse Tim...hope all is good...god bless...^WW^

Lisa Ricci

Date: 6/12/2017 11:18:00 AM

Hello Tim. Yes, you are the poet here in this entry. I found this entry to be traditional and poetry in the truest fashion. It reads beautifully with well chosen words. May this day find you well. Wonderful in its entirety.

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 6/12/2017 8:24:00 AM

That last line is a piece of art. It completes this beautiful sentimental write.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 6/12/2017 12:24:00 AM

I can never figure out if never forgotten is a blessing or a curse, lovely poem!

Eve Roper

Date: 6/11/2017 10:47:00 PM

inviting views are never forgotten ~*

Darren White

Date: 6/11/2017 2:47:00 PM

So beautiful my friend. Great alliteration there, and the sadness is palpable. Hugs!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/11/2017 2:17:00 PM

some meaningful moments never leave the heart, sullen or not... lovely write, tim... huggs

Sara Ella

Date: 6/11/2017 9:20:00 AM

The last line -perfect! A sad poem Tim yet so well written that it makes me smile :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/11/2017 4:59:00 AM

Wow Tim....this is a moving beauty with a poignancy that lingers in the mind. 7 ; )

Daniel Turner

Date: 6/10/2017 6:40:00 PM

"Time,lost along with another passing season" This is the reason I like this poem. You know me, I love sad poems.

Lin Lane

Date: 6/10/2017 5:13:00 PM

I share all of your sentiments, Tim. Those misted moments bring about tiny teardrops as from the salted sea. A melancholy write.

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/10/2017 4:52:00 PM

Love this Tim! A favorite :)

Jan Allison

Date: 6/10/2017 4:47:00 PM

what wonderful poetic memories Tim... one day she will return! love the alliteration in the 2nd stanza :-) hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/10/2017 4:20:00 PM

- Lovely poem, Tim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dale Gregory Cozart

Date: 6/10/2017 3:54:00 PM

This is poignant. It's also sincere and beautiful. Nicely done.