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Never Again

Why the puzzle look as she passes you by on the street? Does it bother you that she walks by without a glance your way? I fail to see how her action could cause such consternation When you once had it all and more, then you threw it away She was the sugar in your tall glass of iced tea The gentle, yet strong hands that broke your falls She took the jabs and hits of life, so you could “feel” strong And when you lacked foresight she gently opened your eyes She became a wall upon which you'd lean your weary back Until, at last you'd stand confident, brave and tall! Then came the day you no longer needed that wall You walked and left it crumbling, faded in gray Then, stripped, emotionally what chance did she have? Now, like a phoenix rising, she stands fabulous on her own Yes, you were “the one” that held her eyes so long Today, as she passed by, she looked straight ahead not at you What she saw was a blurr; and one notoriously known as, “pity” The gentle heart you stole and replaced with a stone, now melting Has made this solemn vow…“Never again!” to see your face ~*~
Note: For John Heck's "Jaded Partitions" Contest

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Date: 12/10/2010 5:04:00 PM
well audrey..that was GREAT..so many of the writes were I'd have placed you higher butwho to place lower??? John had an impossible to task with this one. Definetely a GREAT write! Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 12/7/2010 10:02:00 PM
cherish your well-deserved award, audrey! splendid... huggs, nette
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Date: 12/6/2010 9:28:00 PM
I love it, a good old fashioned revenge poem. This is how i like to read a jaded love poem. Congrats on your HM, Audrey. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 12/6/2010 1:06:00 PM
Congrats Audrey my friend on your HM in John's contest with this super brilliant write and entry ... enjoy a special honor today all your own with luv..
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Date: 12/6/2010 11:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in John's "Jaded Partitions" contest Audrey. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/6/2010 6:09:00 AM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 12/6/2010 1:59:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of Jared, Audrey
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Date: 12/5/2010 9:14:00 PM
Such sad and touching write Many congratulations for this win..
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Date: 12/5/2010 5:31:00 PM
Audrey, this is lovely to read, just send a message here that when it is time to let go of someone, you are sure of it and with no regrets. Appreciate your kind thoughts to my poem: The Pilgrimage, yes it is in connection to the upcoming World Youth Day celebration in Spain, in August of next year. I wish I could be there. Good luck, Audrey for your success in this contest of John Heck. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 12/5/2010 8:42:00 AM
Hey! So take that too! The sweetness of having "got over." Then the question - how could I ever have......." I like this poem mucho. Love, Dave
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Date: 12/4/2010 10:09:00 PM
Awesome entry for the contest, Dimples. When women are unappreciated, they should walk away. Okay, it's hard sometimes but I'm glad this woman had the strength to go on without him. Best wishes for success with this gem, dear. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/4/2010 3:19:00 PM
It is a very moving touching a woman whose replaced with a stone, enjoyed ironies, Audrey
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