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Oh, he that kisses my pale cheek, And my scarlet lips; And my raven hair he does caress, Our love is fierce and strong; Oh, come to me in dreams, in dreams. Hearts and souls, mirror images of desire, Entwined in never-ending flames; A forever blazing inferno of love, No two more linked, connected, alike; Such great passion and sweetness. And although he has long gone above, A name engraved in cold stone; Beneath the earth bones decayed, We remain twin flames, burning; For the soul, the soul never ever dies. Oh, he that kisses my pale cheek, And my scarlet lips; And my raven hair he does caress, Our love is fierce and strong; Oh, come to me in dreams, in dreams. And when my life is done, love, We shall be again a matching pair; And dwell as two flaming stars above. ___________________________ March 2, 2016 Poetry/Verse/Never-Ending Flames Copyright Protected, ID 16-763-537-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym For the contest, Twin Flames sponsor, Nayda, Ivette Negron First Place

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Date: 6/2/2016 5:15:00 AM
Congrats and keep writing beauties like this... thanks for sharing, Dominic.
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Date: 3/19/2016 12:55:00 AM
Broken, Congratulations on your win. **SKAT**
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Date: 3/19/2016 5:18:00 AM
Skat, thanks for the congratulations ~
Date: 3/15/2016 8:29:00 AM
Hi Constance, Congratulations on your 1st place win in the contest. Desire, Passion, Romance, Love, all wrapped up and served with such gentle words. Your words can conjure up such wonderful visions in the mind of the reader and reach deep within the Soul, reaching deep into the heart of the reader with their gentleness. Once more you lay a dream of of peace before us. This dream has to be a seven and into my faves....MIKE.
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Date: 3/15/2016 2:10:00 PM
Mike, thanks for visiting with the congrats and the lovely comment and the seven and fav, appreciate so much ~
Date: 3/13/2016 8:59:00 PM
Awesome poem, Broken Wings! I loved the turn around from two flames too twin flaming stars in the night sky .... sounds like a better deal to me. Congrats.
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Date: 3/14/2016 10:40:00 AM
Tim, thanks for visiting with the great comment and the congrats !
Date: 3/13/2016 2:45:00 PM
Congratulations on the placement of the contest Constance
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Date: 3/13/2016 7:17:00 PM
Nayda, thanks for a great contest and for my awesome placement !
Date: 3/13/2016 2:16:00 PM
Great passion and great win. Congratulations, Broken Wings
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Date: 3/13/2016 7:18:00 PM
Charlie, thank you so much for the congratulations !
Date: 3/13/2016 12:32:00 PM
BW, wonderful poem! congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
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Date: 3/13/2016 7:19:00 PM
Laura, thanks for the wonderful, and the wonderful !
Date: 3/9/2016 6:27:00 AM
Emotionally and beautifully written, BW. You are such a romantic.
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Date: 3/9/2016 9:36:00 PM
James, thanks for visiting with the beautiful !
Date: 3/6/2016 3:09:00 PM
May it be so. Absolutely.
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Date: 3/6/2016 6:55:00 PM
Duke, thanks for visiting, appreciate !
Date: 3/4/2016 5:02:00 AM
Superb Constance!
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Date: 3/4/2016 8:31:00 AM
Balveen, thanks for visiting with the superb !
Date: 3/3/2016 1:55:00 PM
Real great write Constance, so romantic and emotional, really catches one's breath!
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Date: 3/3/2016 4:46:00 PM
Gordon, thanks for visiting with the nice comment, so appreciated !!
Date: 3/3/2016 1:47:00 PM
Broken Wings...your "flame" will never be extinguished!...it will always "flame" brighter! May you always "Write on!"
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Date: 3/3/2016 4:51:00 PM
Walter, thank you so much for that lovely comment ~
Date: 3/3/2016 2:57:00 AM
Your pale cheek a frost of ivory silk, those scarlet lips the heat of my interests, your raven hair feathered so fair, beneath and above the stars our love does glare, forever and ever is the ink in our book..."Hearts and souls, mirror images of desire..." your beauty is elegant and wise Wings of Fire...J.A.B.
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Date: 3/3/2016 10:53:00 AM
Justin, oh thank you for that beautiful poetic comment and for the compliments !!
Date: 3/2/2016 10:29:00 PM
romantic :) good luck in Nayda's contest.
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Date: 3/4/2016 12:51:00 AM
Eve, thanks so much for visiting my poem, appreciate ~

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