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Nevada, 1969

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An all-but-empty Interstate stretches straight, streaking horizon to horizon: it is a ribbon with no bow, wrapping northern Nevada. The eye fixes on absent fences, looks for limits, scans scenery overwhelmed by sky. I cock my thumb to beg a ride; a tear forms at the corner of my eye. "Damn wind!" I mutter, half believing the lie. A dusty pickup rolls toward me then accelerates, leaves me staring. It dwindles into distance. -- "OK!", I snarl -- I kick a rock, pick up my pack and start to walk, left thumb poked out to nothing. Someone will stop. Two cars speed by; I wave to them. My belly rumbles and I count the steps I take. My wet eyes ache. Someone will stop. Or won't.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/6/2020 4:16:00 PM
You have been here a long time Leo. This is a good first offering to the soup. I’m glad I stopped to read it.
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Date: 5/11/2018 5:23:00 PM
What a most endearing poem, Leo. Love it. I particularly love the lines 'a tear forms at the corner of my eye. "Damn wind!" I mutter, half believing the lie.' With you reading it, it just wants to roll around in my head in a most enjoyable way. I think I need to FAVE this one too.
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Date: 6/21/2015 1:28:00 PM
Atmospheric! That was a good start to your posting here, Leo!
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Date: 10/17/2012 4:56:00 PM
Rode my thumb a lot when I was young. Interesting write.
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Date: 12/8/2011 10:10:00 AM
just taking a look at your first poem here on soup, not disappointed, awesome. harry
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Date: 5/13/2011 7:51:00 PM
Leo.. congratulations on your wonderful feature of the week... I sure enjoyed... take care,..p.d
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Date: 5/9/2011 10:25:00 PM
Hi Leo!....what a sad sad story!...I can feel ya man....the anticipation of someone stopping for you soon...but omg!...the way this world is now a days...people are just to scared to pick up people on the hwy's anymore....I loved the line..'A tear forms in the corner of my eye..."damm wind'......we both know it was not the wind....GREAT PIECE OF WORK HERE...I LOVED IT!...SugarbearUSA........:)
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Date: 5/9/2011 9:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Leo. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/9/2011 4:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Larry
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Date: 5/8/2011 4:59:00 PM
Congrats Leo on your featured poem this week on P.S. .. a great one to share with us all ..with luv.. about a beautiful State.. on a special day of luv..
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Date: 4/19/2011 3:25:00 PM
So lonely !!
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Date: 4/19/2011 1:57:00 PM
Sounds like you could start a novel like Grapes of Wrath? Light & Love
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