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Nevada, 1969

An all-but-empty Interstate stretches
straight, streaking horizon to horizon:
it is a ribbon with no bow, wrapping
northern Nevada.

                            The eye fixes
on absent fences, looks for limits,
scans scenery overwhelmed by sky.
I cock my thumb to beg a ride;
a tear forms at the corner of my eye.

"Damn wind!"
I mutter, half believing the lie.

       A dusty pickup rolls toward me
then accelerates, leaves me staring.
It dwindles into distance. -- "OK!",
I snarl.

I kick a rock, pick up my pack
and start to walk, left thumb poked
out to nothing.

                        Someone will stop.
Two cars speed by; I wave to them.

My belly rumbles and I count
the steps I take. My wet eyes ache.

Someone will stop.

Or won't.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Lamoureux Avatar
February 6, 2020 at 4:16 PM
You have been here a long time Leo. This is a good first offering to the soup. I’m glad I stopped to read it.
Gauthier Avatar
May 11, 2018 at 5:23 PM
What a most endearing poem, Leo. Love it. I particularly love the lines 'a tear forms at the corner of my eye. "Damn wind!" I mutter, half believing the lie.' With you reading it, it just wants to roll around in my head in a most enjoyable way. I think I need to FAVE this one too.
Ward Avatar
June 21, 2015 at 1:28 PM
Atmospheric! That was a good start to your posting here, Leo!
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
October 17, 2012 at 4:56 PM
Rode my thumb a lot when I was young. Interesting write.
Horsman Avatar
December 8, 2011 at 10:10 AM
just taking a look at your first poem here on soup, not disappointed, awesome. harry
A   Avatar
May 13, 2011 at 7:51 PM
Leo.. congratulations on your wonderful feature of the week... I sure enjoyed... take care,..p.d
Fallin Avatar
May 9, 2011 at 10:25 PM
Hi Leo!....what a sad sad story!...I can feel ya man....the anticipation of someone stopping for you soon...but omg!...the way this world is now a days...people are just to scared to pick up people on the hwy's anymore....I loved the line..'A tear forms in the corner of my eye..."damm wind'......we both know it was not the wind....GREAT PIECE OF WORK HERE...I LOVED IT!...SugarbearUSA........:)
Brown Avatar
May 9, 2011 at 9:55 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Leo. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
May 9, 2011 at 4:39 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Larry
Sweetheart Avatar
May 8, 2011 at 4:59 PM
Congrats Leo on your featured poem this week on P.S. .. a great one to share with us all ..with luv.. about a beautiful State.. on a special day of luv..
Squyres Avatar
April 19, 2011 at 3:25 PM
So lonely !!
Guzzi Avatar
April 19, 2011 at 1:57 PM
Sounds like you could start a novel like Grapes of Wrath? Light & Love
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