Neuron

Nestled paths for signals, Neutral navy chemists, New stimuli framers, Nurturing dopamine, Nascent as life's beacon, Neon nirvana-stars Nourished in our wine flesh.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/23/2023 2:48:00 AM

Back with congratulations. SK

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/21/2023 5:26:00 AM

Congratulations!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/20/2023 4:15:00 AM

- Congratulations on your win in the Pleiades 5 Poetry Contest, Hiya :) -

Joseph May

Date: 9/19/2023 11:25:00 PM

Very nicely penned Hiya, Congrats on your win

Bill Baker

Date: 9/19/2023 4:34:00 PM

I enjoyed the creativity you displayed in this well-written Pleiades poem, Hiya. It seems your talent in poetry writing is the same in whichever form you choose to write in. I enjoyed reading and commenting on your poetry today, my friend. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Joanna Daniel

Date: 9/19/2023 2:18:00 AM

Creative and informative, Hiya:)

Sam Scott

Date: 9/18/2023 9:12:00 AM

My biology background shouts: clever, very clever and you add your own eloquence and insightful descriptive poetry. This is uniquely fabulous! "Neon nirvana-stars" (as Ink says) is inspired.

Valsa George

Date: 9/18/2023 4:50:00 AM

How scientific and how well articulated ! Without the proper functioning of neurons, man is incapable of doing anything. Neurons produce dopamine. Without it life will go haywire and we can never feel good. They are new stimulai framers.. We are stimulated to take up new ventures through the working of neurons. This beautiful poem is the product of well aligned neurons. Love how you have handled a difficult subject with so much ease. A sure winner, dear friend. All the Best.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/18/2023 1:06:00 AM

- "Nascent as life's beacon" ... wonderfully described, Hiya :) - (a difficult topic) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/17/2023 1:02:00 PM

Creative way to go with the word chosen. When those neuron connections are scrambled life is very difficult for the person and those around them. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 9/16/2023 10:18:00 PM

This is so creatively executed dear inspiring poetess. "Neon nirvana stars that are nourished in our wine flesh"... so brilliant. You began this so well.. " nestled paths for signals.."... "nurturing dopamine".... how true isn't it? If only the neurons in our brains do not produce enough dopamine, it will result in lack of motivation, memory loss, and even depression, I read. The functions of neurons well described Hiya. Best wishes in the contest. Hugs... ~ Ani

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 9/16/2023 2:04:00 PM

a unique topic for a Pleiades, but I liked what you did. Neon nirvana stars is brilliant. Enjoyed your creation, have a wonderful day, Sara

Hiya Sharma
Date: 9/16/2023 8:07:00 PM

Oh, thank you so much dear Sara. Honestly, I wasn't sure about posting this, but finally I did.. This is for a contest and I chose Neuron from the given words, that's why. Well, I'm so glad that you like this!! Sending love, have a beautiful Sunday :)

Tom Woody

Date: 9/16/2023 10:45:00 AM

Heya Hiya love this Pleiades. You chose a unique subject to write about. Studying on this in class?

Hiya Sharma
Date: 9/16/2023 7:39:00 PM

Oh haha, no, dear Tom! I studied this around 6 years ago. Actually, I've written this for a Pleiades contest which has 'Neuron' as one of its prompt words, that's why.. Was quite nervous to post this lol, it was very different to write. Well, I've Mathematics and Physics as my main subjects for higher studies :)

Silent One

Date: 9/16/2023 8:53:00 AM

You weaved this one together so well.. great choice of words to describe neuron... Neon nirvana stars is great descriptive writing... hope you do well in the contest..

Hiya Sharma
Date: 9/16/2023 7:51:00 PM

Thank you so much Silent One. I'm so glad to know that you liked the word choices and implementation of this Pleiades, I was quite hesitant to post this.. So grateful for your kind visit :)

Robert Lindley

Date: 9/16/2023 8:17:00 AM

Every verse a joy to read. The depth of this new creation is indeed awesome. As only a top poet could gift this dark world. This is itself definitely a true gem. A fav. God bless you my good friend.

Hiya Sharma
Date: 9/16/2023 7:49:00 PM

Your words are SO kind and deeply honouring. Thank you so much for your beautiful visit and I'm so glad to know that you enjoyed reading this, truly appreciate it! Means a lot coming from a wonderful poet like you :) and thank you for the fav too!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/16/2023 8:11:00 AM

Every line an evocation stemming from poetic brilliance, Hiya. No matter which line I reflect on--they all shine in your poetic prowess--navy chemists, stimuli framers, nascent as lie's beacon , nirvana stars--symphony of metaphors! An instant FAVE!!

Hiya Sharma
Date: 9/16/2023 7:42:00 PM

Thank you SO much for your ethereal support always, this means a lot coming from a brilliant poet like you truly. I'm so glad that you enjoyed reading this and am very grateful for the Fav! :)

Constance La France

Date: 9/16/2023 7:30:00 AM

Hiya, skillfully written, exceptional, best of luck in the contest.

Hiya Sharma
Date: 9/16/2023 7:36:00 PM

Thank you so much dear beautiful soul, I'm grateful for your kind visit and for these lovely words! Sending love :)

Sotto Poet

Date: 9/16/2023 7:03:00 AM

Your description of the pleiades on the neuron is truly remarkable. You have managed to beautifully capture the complexities of this intricate form, presenting factual information about neurons in a poetic and imaginative way. Good luck with the contest

Hiya Sharma
Date: 9/16/2023 7:35:00 PM

Dear Sotto, thank you so much for your kind visit and for reading this Pleiades. I'm so glad that you liked reading this and yes it's a very intriguing form.. So grateful for your generous and wonderful words, always, have a beautiful Sunday :)

Ink Empress

Date: 9/16/2023 5:45:00 AM

Neon nirvana stars! Ah what a line for this pleiades on neuron, its not an easy form and you’ve nailed it really, you’ve stated facts about neuron so poetically and in a creative manner, i think every science teacher should use this pleiades to teach students definition of neurons, definitely would leave imprinted in their mind! So catchy and beautiful! Your way with words is always unique and you chose definitely not an easy word for this too! I wrote few too, Goodluck for the contest. Luv it

Hiya Sharma
Date: 9/16/2023 7:33:00 PM

Thank you SO much for your angelic support always my dearest Ink Empress.. Your reviews and feedbacks are always shining just like your lovely poems! Beyond grateful for your beautiful kindness and I'm so glad that you like this Pleiades, was so nervous to post this lol.. Sending you so much love :)