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Neon Lady

I see a Neon Lady, green rain from the clouds. Yet she is pure evil, this engraved upon her crown. Six hundred million people, into dust on scorched ground. I see a Neon Lady, green rain from the clouds. I see a Neon Man, bad rain from the clouds. He's draped in red linen, his evil death shroud. He stands with a sickle, Raving madly out loud. I see a Neon Man, bad rain from the cloud's. I see the Ukraine, where Patriots are falling. I see many nations, are waiting or talking. The Earth turmoils in flames, While millions are squalling. I feel winds of change, And Hear Freedom Calling.

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Date: 6/27/2024 10:54:00 AM
Wow! A terrific first poem, heartfelt!
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R J. Elless
Date: 6/27/2024 12:39:00 PM
Thank you my friend. This was an inspiration. I Know this may seem weird but its true. It was a vision while in twilight falling asleep. This weird green llight and all of these things on the ground. And a blinding white lash. This poem is what I figured out. Thank you again for being so kind. Have a Great Day.
Date: 10/21/2022 5:37:00 PM
Wow! Very good!
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R J. Elless
Date: 10/22/2022 5:54:00 PM
Thank you Kim. It sort of got me started here. Thank You for reading it. Stay Creative. H
Date: 9/9/2022 3:34:00 PM
Very well done. Makes me see Prophecy.
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R J. Elless
Date: 9/10/2022 7:26:00 AM
Thank You Milton. Keep Rolling. Howard.
Date: 9/9/2022 10:37:00 AM
Like this one very much. Great use of metaphor with the neon man with red linen and sickle referring to Russia in the second stanza.
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R J. Elless
Date: 9/10/2022 7:28:00 AM
Thank You James. It took a bit to get the imagery to fit. Keep Rolling. Howard.
Date: 5/27/2022 11:27:00 AM
That would be a great song! Very nice!
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Date: 5/27/2022 6:11:00 AM
This is beautiful and very touching! Thank you for sharing.
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Date: 5/26/2022 7:13:00 PM
Your poem says so much especially at this present time. Also thankyou for commenting on my poem. We all need to know that others actually read our work and I did appreciate its content.
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R J. Elless
Date: 5/27/2022 5:09:00 AM
Thank you.

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