Neon Lady

I see a Neon Lady,
green rain from the clouds.
Yet she is pure evil,
this engraved upon her crown.
Six hundred million people,
into dust on scorched ground.
I see a Neon Lady,
green rain from the clouds.

I see a Neon Man,
bad rain from the clouds.
He's draped in red linen,
his evil death shroud.
He stands with a sickle,
Raving madly out loud.
I see a Neon Man,
bad rain from the cloud's.


I see the Ukraine,
where Patriots are falling.
I see many nations,
are waiting or talking.
The Earth turmoils in flames,
While millions are squalling.
I feel winds of change,
And Hear Freedom Calling.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Rodrigues Avatar
June 27, 2024 at 10:54 AM
Wow! A terrific first poem, heartfelt!
Elless Avatar
June 27, 2024 at 12:39 PM
Thank you my friend. This was an inspiration. I Know this may seem weird but its true. It was a vision while in twilight falling asleep. This weird green llight and all of these things on the ground. And a blinding white lash. This poem is what I figured out. Thank you again for being so kind. Have a Great Day.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 21, 2022 at 5:37 PM
Wow! Very good!
Elless Avatar
October 22, 2022 at 5:54 PM
Thank you Kim. It sort of got me started here. Thank You for reading it. Stay Creative. H
Robertson Avatar
September 9, 2022 at 3:34 PM
Very well done. Makes me see Prophecy.
Elless Avatar
September 10, 2022 at 7:26 AM
Thank You Milton. Keep Rolling. Howard.
Inman Avatar
September 9, 2022 at 10:37 AM
Like this one very much. Great use of metaphor with the neon man with red linen and sickle referring to Russia in the second stanza.
Elless Avatar
September 10, 2022 at 7:28 AM
Thank You James. It took a bit to get the imagery to fit. Keep Rolling. Howard.
Hitchcock Avatar
May 27, 2022 at 11:27 AM
That would be a great song! Very nice!
Goemans Avatar
May 27, 2022 at 6:11 AM
This is beautiful and very touching! Thank you for sharing.
Gelok Avatar
May 26, 2022 at 7:13 PM
Your poem says so much especially at this present time. Also thankyou for commenting on my poem. We all need to know that others actually read our work and I did appreciate its content.
Elless Avatar
May 27, 2022 at 5:09 AM
Thank you.
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