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Necropolis

Fading stars cloak the blistered midnight skyline, whilst burning embers of a whistling fire swirl mournfully in the impending winter winds. Alabaster flakes drift, creating dunes along the receding shoreline. I lay between long-forgotten beach bones, memento mori. Breath catches in my throat, and all the while, I press my cyanotic fingers against the crumbling relics, tracing what was once porcelain life, now abandoned, left to decay with the sands of time, as soon I, too, will become lost in this bleached necropolis.

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Date: 2/7/2025 9:54:00 AM
Stunning imagery, dramatic Latin, and I'm hoping that you really don't have 'cyanotic' fingers...crossing mine!
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Sara Jama
Date: 2/7/2025 10:29:00 AM
Thank you very much for reading my poetry.
Date: 10/18/2024 6:54:00 AM
Beautiful as always! So touching and moving! Love the way youv painted imagery especially here! I lovee the prompt too and you did well for it! I especially love the line “ Breath catches in my throat, and all the while, I press my cyanotic fingers against the crumbling relics,“ and the last line and the title is impeccable! Best wishes for the contest!
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Sara Jama
Date: 2/7/2025 10:28:00 AM
Thank you so much Ink for all the support.

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