Nearly Perfect

Hazelnut coffee, Barefoot on the patio, Classic rock playing. My life is nearly perfect But I still haven't found you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 10/24/2012 3:49:00 PM
I saw below when I commented on this one a while back. I had loved it then and I love it now. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 10/24/2012 5:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in ~SKAT~'s "TANKA ME" contest Francine. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/24/2012 4:03:00 AM
CONGRATS FRANCINE ON A SENSATIONAL WRITE .. OH SO TRUE .. AND GRAND WIN TOO LUV ..
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Date: 10/23/2012 7:12:00 PM
FRANCINE , congratulations with your "Tanka me this, Tanka me that, Tanka me any poem you want :-) LOL.... what a title.. Love it and enjoyed stopping by all my sisters tanka winners... good night... LUV~PD
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Date: 10/23/2012 3:34:00 PM
Big congratulations on your win, Francine! hugs:)LG
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Date: 10/23/2012 2:15:00 PM
F, Congrats on your win' luv * Siddy
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Date: 7/8/2011 7:53:00 PM
I loved it the first time I saw it too. Congrats in the winner's circle. I really enjoy this type of poem.
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Date: 7/8/2011 4:39:00 PM
Congrats on your HM, Francine. Excellent tanka. Enjoyed. Have a great weekend. Thanks for your comments. luv Ralph
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Date: 7/8/2011 7:18:00 AM
I love this one!! That perfect world....."almost complete"....but there is always hope in tomorrow! Well done, Francine!!
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Date: 7/8/2011 5:53:00 AM
Congrats Francine on your HM in Brian's contest with this lovely creative poetry.. stunning imagery and perfect combos for perfection luv..
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Date: 7/8/2011 5:35:00 AM
Excellent Tanka, Francine. Many congrats on your HM. Lainie
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Date: 7/8/2011 4:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Francine in Brian's contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/8/2011 5:15:00 PM
A great descriptive tanka.
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Date: 7/29/2010 9:29:00 PM
ok, this one best so far! a FAV
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Date: 7/22/2010 11:45:00 PM
OH, this is VERY nice!! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 7/22/2010 1:02:00 PM
Awesome Tanka Francine. As Nazareth sang I'm on 'This Flight Tonight' >> James
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Date: 7/21/2010 11:23:00 PM
A very lovely write. Continue to be nearly perfect - that's the best we will ever get.
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Date: 7/21/2010 6:52:00 AM
Sounds like a perfect life to me, do you really need "he" just joking ~~~
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Date: 7/20/2010 6:57:00 PM
Good one Francine. I enjoyed it. Charles
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Date: 7/20/2010 5:41:00 AM
I enjoyed the nearly perfect
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Date: 7/20/2010 3:59:00 AM
Good luck in the finding of you...Beautiful write..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
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Date: 7/19/2010 10:09:00 PM
Short and sweet, right to the point. I like it. Also, you will find them sooner than later, I promise.
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