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Nearly Perfect

Hazelnut coffee, Barefoot on the patio, Classic rock playing. My life is nearly perfect But I still haven't found you.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/24/2012 3:49:00 PM

I saw below when I commented on this one a while back. I had loved it then and I love it now. Congrats on your win.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/24/2012 5:49:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in ~SKAT~'s "TANKA ME" contest Francine. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/24/2012 4:03:00 AM

CONGRATS FRANCINE ON A SENSATIONAL WRITE .. OH SO TRUE .. AND GRAND WIN TOO LUV ..

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/23/2012 7:12:00 PM

FRANCINE , congratulations with your "Tanka me this, Tanka me that, Tanka me any poem you want :-) LOL.... what a title.. Love it and enjoyed stopping by all my sisters tanka winners... good night... LUV~PD

Len Gasun

Date: 10/23/2012 3:34:00 PM

Big congratulations on your win, Francine! hugs:)LG

Skat A

Date: 10/23/2012 2:15:00 PM

F, Congrats on your win' luv * Siddy

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/8/2011 7:53:00 PM

I loved it the first time I saw it too. Congrats in the winner's circle. I really enjoy this type of poem.

Ralph Taylor

Date: 7/8/2011 4:39:00 PM

Congrats on your HM, Francine. Excellent tanka. Enjoyed. Have a great weekend. Thanks for your comments. luv Ralph

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/8/2011 7:18:00 AM

I love this one!! That perfect world....."almost complete"....but there is always hope in tomorrow! Well done, Francine!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/8/2011 5:53:00 AM

Congrats Francine on your HM in Brian's contest with this lovely creative poetry.. stunning imagery and perfect combos for perfection luv..

Elaine George

Date: 7/8/2011 5:35:00 AM

Excellent Tanka, Francine. Many congrats on your HM. Lainie

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/8/2011 4:04:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Francine in Brian's contest. Love, Carol

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/8/2011 5:15:00 PM

A great descriptive tanka.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/29/2010 9:29:00 PM

ok, this one best so far! a FAV

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/22/2010 11:45:00 PM

OH, this is VERY nice!! Luv, Andrea

James Fraser

Date: 7/22/2010 1:02:00 PM

Awesome Tanka Francine. As Nazareth sang I'm on 'This Flight Tonight' >> James

Earle Brown

Date: 7/21/2010 11:23:00 PM

A very lovely write. Continue to be nearly perfect - that's the best we will ever get.

Constance La France

Date: 7/21/2010 6:52:00 AM

Sounds like a perfect life to me, do you really need "he" just joking ~~~

Charles Henderson

Date: 7/20/2010 6:57:00 PM

Good one Francine. I enjoyed it. Charles

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/20/2010 5:41:00 AM

I enjoyed the nearly perfect

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/20/2010 3:59:00 AM

Good luck in the finding of you...Beautiful write..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara

Chris Matt

Date: 7/19/2010 10:09:00 PM

Short and sweet, right to the point. I like it. Also, you will find them sooner than later, I promise.