Navel Contemplation

I could write to you about what it feels like to be unhinged, untethered, to float on a breeze of malintent But what would it matter to you? Thinking random thoughts anchorless, adrift in a typhoon of emotional baggage for which you have lost the claim tag. In this flash bulb, pop snap, presto-chango world where the only sane thing to do, or be, is to be insane, I could talk to you of that…… Of the parenting child, wiping up the vomit of a blighted gene pool. Of the wound-up, pent-up, morally straightjacketed, youth who has no example of the rightness of creation or the necessity of destruction. All this masticating, ruminating, procrastinating does not stop the clock, the pendulum continues its swing…. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Sometimes within an all too ego driven self, I assume you don’t know this! The masses of opiated, upward looking stiffs, passing through, and over their pap driven lives don’t know this? ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Ah, but after realizing I realize nothing I conclude… you have been there haven’t you? Perhaps, your realizations did not arrive from the same lessons as mine. But after searching through an exorcism of soul I would think You know, in your heart of hearts you know. In one form, or another, at one time, or another, you have all been there blessed with insanity, in a world which leaves few other outlets between life and death. For the sensitive’s in life are surrounded with knifes, and guns, and drugs..lures to cut the tethers, burst our bubbles and rock our boats.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Mason Avatar
September 8, 2012 at 3:46 PM
wonderful poem. sensitive yes but never alone. warm thoughts, Ralph
Maverick Avatar
September 7, 2012 at 3:36 PM
Wow this is goood)) yes important things could be achieved with this type of write..)
Pettit Avatar
September 6, 2012 at 4:26 PM
Such deep descriptiveness here. I consider this the "Miller Beer" of poems. If you've got the time, we've got the poem.
Song Avatar
September 4, 2012 at 3:59 PM
Debs,,,,have u ever read something and just felt speechless...? This is one of them...I have much MORE to contemplate now...love the -ings that changed the tempo in the middle and the attitude of your rhyme...I truly can picture this being read at a poetry slam...completely! Did I mention POETRY SLAM??
Guzzi Avatar
September 5, 2012 at 5:41 AM
I think ..the slams I went to folks had memorized the whole thing! not as easy to do as it used to be!
Andresen Avatar
September 4, 2012 at 12:43 PM
A new and popular comments Debbie:...Hmmmmmm.....:) Well done, like it - Hope I get a Hmmmm back -....lol.. xoxo love Anne-Lise :)
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September 4, 2012 at 11:15 AM
Wow, fantastic and more to contemplate today. Another hmmm from me. LOL... Yes, we have all been blessed with insanity and my boat has been rocked a few times...more deep thoughts...I took your advice and changed my poem to present tense and you are right. It's more powerful like being a fly on the wall. Thanks for the tip. Love and Blessings, Rhonda
La France Avatar
September 4, 2012 at 10:45 AM
Hi Debbie, beautiful written. You are such and excellent writer. Not sure if I thanked you for my HM in your recent contest, but thanks so much, I am very honoured. Love Constance
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