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Clad in Her gold-fillagree slip, Luna beams rays of gilded light. And increases Her tidal grip clad in Her gold-fillagree slip. Where sky meets sea, She takes a dip, She's a beacon lost to the night. Clad in Her gold-fillagree slip, Luna beams rays of gilded light. She's a beacon lost to the night that ebbs and flows each monthly trip. And, each time, vanishes from sight; She's a beacon lost to the night. A naughty lass and sassy sprite, with each full moon, She starts to strip. She's a beacon lost to the night that ebbs and flows each monthly trip. (Intertwining Triolet) 5/4/2016

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Line Gauthier

Date: 3/8/2018 8:32:00 AM

Naughty Luna. LOL

Emile Pinet
Date: 3/8/2018 9:51:00 AM

Thanks Line, I appreciate you insightful comments. Emile.

Funom Makama

Date: 5/16/2016 10:19:00 AM

Salute to your pen and a well done to the mind out of which this sea of wisdom emanated. A definite 7

Emile Pinet
Date: 5/16/2016 10:25:00 AM

Thanks Funom, you have brought a smile to my day. Emile.

Paul Callus

Date: 5/12/2016 6:32:00 AM

Always a pleasure to read your poems, Emile. This is a lovely and appealing triolet in which the moon teases and flirts as she sails through the night. ~ All the best // paul

Emile Pinet
Date: 5/12/2016 9:10:00 AM

Thanks my friend, I appreciate your wonderful comments. Emile.

John Hamilton

Date: 5/9/2016 8:44:00 AM

What great imagery Emile, I must admit I was unsure what to get by the Title but was pleasantly surprised to be seduced by the moon, great work what a talent you have!

Emile Pinet
Date: 5/9/2016 11:56:00 AM

Thanks John, I appreciate your time and friendly comments. Emile.

Mark Peterson

Date: 5/6/2016 9:09:00 AM

I appreciated your use of capitalization as worthy honorific. I was likewise disarmed by the rather erotic inferences of Luna disrobing: my sideways glances at her naughty apparitions will never be quite the same.

Emile Pinet
Date: 5/12/2016 9:09:00 AM

Thanks Mark, I appreciate your friendly visits and comments. Emile.

Jan Allison

Date: 5/4/2016 7:31:00 PM

wow such sensual imagery - you bring the moon great sex appeal Emile:-) fabulous to see you back - I have missed you:-) hugs jan xx7

Emile Pinet
Date: 5/5/2016 8:16:00 AM

Thanks Jan, I appreciate it. Emile.