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Naughty Or Nice

Of all the county’s bounty harvest Steelcut oats got to be the humblest Fudge muffins do seduce Temptation's lush excuse To have us eat small cakes for breakfast AP: Honorable Mention 2021 Posted on January 17, 2019

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Eve Roper

Date: 1/18/2019 6:53:00 PM

Nicely done. rhyme, I prefer it for breakfast :~) ..Hugs Eve ~`*

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/18/2019 11:24:00 PM

I didn't take you for such a naughty poetess, Eve. LOL

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/18/2019 8:08:00 AM

For sure! Nice one...a little naughty!

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/18/2019 12:51:00 PM

What if we share and just eat half? LOL

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 1/18/2019 7:58:00 AM

Hi Line, If I don't have a sweet triple choc muffin for breakfast, my family would think there is something wrong with me - am a huge sweet tooth! Great limerick. Well done. Poetry wishes, Jennifer.

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/18/2019 12:52:00 PM

LOL definitely hard to resist, Jennifer.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 1/18/2019 6:34:00 AM

Oh, of course! They sound luscious.

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/18/2019 7:00:00 AM

Breakfast of champions! LOL

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/17/2019 10:00:00 PM

Fudge muffins! Come on, Line. I had just resolved to not eat one more thing tonight. Not only have I never heard of a fudge muffin, but now I am starving not having one. Nice one!

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/17/2019 11:57:00 PM

LOL make sure you warm it up a little to enjoy all its ooey gooey goodness, Caren. You did notice the title I hope!