Naughty Or Nice

Of all the county’s bounty harvest
Steelcut oats got to be the humblest
Fudge muffins do seduce
Temptation's lush excuse
To have us eat small cakes for breakfast



AP: Honorable Mention 2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Roper Avatar
January 18, 2019 at 6:53 PM
Nicely done. rhyme, I prefer it for breakfast :~) ..Hugs Eve ~`*
Gauthier Avatar
January 18, 2019 at 11:24 PM
I didn't take you for such a naughty poetess, Eve. LOL
Rodrigues Avatar
January 18, 2019 at 8:08 AM
For sure! Nice one...a little naughty!
Gauthier Avatar
January 18, 2019 at 12:51 PM
What if we share and just eat half? LOL
Proxenos Avatar
January 18, 2019 at 7:58 AM
Hi Line, If I don't have a sweet triple choc muffin for breakfast, my family would think there is something wrong with me - am a huge sweet tooth! Great limerick. Well done. Poetry wishes, Jennifer.
Gauthier Avatar
January 18, 2019 at 12:52 PM
LOL definitely hard to resist, Jennifer.
Kiser Avatar
January 18, 2019 at 6:34 AM
Oh, of course! They sound luscious.
Gauthier Avatar
January 18, 2019 at 7:00 AM
Breakfast of champions! LOL
Krutsinger Avatar
January 17, 2019 at 10:00 PM
Fudge muffins! Come on, Line. I had just resolved to not eat one more thing tonight. Not only have I never heard of a fudge muffin, but now I am starving not having one. Nice one!
Gauthier Avatar
January 17, 2019 at 11:57 PM
LOL make sure you warm it up a little to enjoy all its ooey gooey goodness, Caren. You did notice the title I hope!
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