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Nature's Way

If I were to stray from the straight road,
meander along twisted olden paths
let me not see an ordered place
like some new grown garden
designed by some modern nursery
to whom you must pay a hefty price.
 
Give me the lonely winding trails
lined with hard square granite
which farmers use for rubble walls,
that in turn give some shelter 
to the prolific cape sorrel 
swaying their yellowish flowers 
with light sea gentle breezes 
that fill the air with misty sea breeze
and manure maturing in the sunny rays.
 
A sudden bend might reveal
the reddish volcanic scoria
so oft used in Christmas cribs.
Afar dogs bark and jump with glee
at birds that occasionally fly low,
while the stately old palms
stand like a rock at some juncture
in this heavenly bliss.
 
At last a wooden bench I'll find
not far from carob trees.
There I will rest alone at peace
as far away as possible from it all.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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George Avatar
November 24, 2021 at 2:39 AM
Away from the din and bustle of city life, it is a pleasure rambling through stone paved ways where you will be able to spot exotic plants and interesting creatures. In a lonely bench sitting and relaxing inhaling the county air will be lovely. Victor you led me along this 'stonehenge'
Laurie Avatar
November 6, 2021 at 4:33 PM
Hello Victor ... Mother Nature's garden is the perfect garden, providing balance, a food source, colour and fragrance, but not always in the order that pleases humanity. Your poem explains this so well Victor - Lindsay
Kiser Avatar
November 3, 2021 at 3:34 PM
This has some fantastic imagery; well penned.
Gilmour Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 10:43 PM
Finding that peace Victor is what keeps us sane. Your wonderful words show how therapeutic it can be for our heart and soul... Lovely write Victor. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Ball Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 12:22 PM
Oh Me Too my friend, Give me the wide open spaces far away from the maddening crowds and the motor exhausts. Loved this. God Bless, JB
Roper Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 7:54 AM
Peace and seclusion in our way up a path to beauty of God's heaven. Enjoyed reading my friend.
Edmonds  Avatar
October 17, 2021 at 5:49 PM
What I would give for the lonely winding trails that lead to the beautiful scenes to be seen that you describe through your poetry Victor. A delightful read… Belle
Rose  Avatar
October 17, 2021 at 2:49 PM
We all need a wooden bench where we can rest our weary souls Victor, :)
Cunningham Avatar
October 17, 2021 at 12:35 PM
Being alone with nature is so soothing Victor. Tom
Rodrigues Avatar
October 17, 2021 at 5:19 AM
I especially love the imagery in this poem, Victor! A fave for me!
Legros Kelley Avatar
October 16, 2021 at 10:36 PM
That sounds so peaceful. Very well written
Jones Avatar
October 16, 2021 at 5:59 PM
This poem carries the reader away to those quaint places and smells you so poetically breath life into. Such a peaceful feeling just reading it thanks Victor!
Buehler Avatar
October 16, 2021 at 4:43 PM
Your poem about peace, beauty and tranquility off the beaten path, certainly strikes a chord, Victor. Well done! :)
Dietrich Avatar
October 16, 2021 at 4:03 PM
This is wonderfully descriptive, Victor. Sorry it took me so long to view poems this week. Keep up the good work.
One Avatar
October 16, 2021 at 3:20 PM
WE all need to escape from the noise.. looking for serenity... you have so much imagery in your poem..
Andresen Avatar
October 16, 2021 at 12:02 PM
- You walk on my path, Victor ... far from the noise of the city - Beautiful and peaceful ... just enjoy nature :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Lawless Avatar
October 16, 2021 at 8:47 AM
..."as far away as possible from it all"...I go there in a kayak on a river that runs through a city.....go figure
Poet Avatar
October 16, 2021 at 8:38 AM
A beautiful poem full of compassion and perception! Victor, it's a delight to read it; you've done it again with an exceptional metaphorical verse. From start to finish, I was glued to the screen, your pen is always in pristine shape.
Pandit Avatar
October 16, 2021 at 6:46 AM
Another excellent write filled with images, Victor. I stayed glued to the screen strolling with you from start to finish. Your pen always shines.
Riabi Dziri Avatar
October 16, 2021 at 4:00 AM
That's truly Nature's way! It cultivates in you the need to be a loner seeking peace and seclusion to save its scent and beauty.. to savour its soothing and charming sensations.. A great poetry of sensitivity and perception ! So much delighted to read you, Victor! My deepest regards and blessings.
Seeker Avatar
October 16, 2021 at 2:16 AM
Echo what Lisa said! I’m sure the bench can accommodate three! :)
Ricci Avatar
October 16, 2021 at 2:07 AM
Good Morning Victor - Can you make reservations for us to this far away place from it all. I so enjoyed the imagery that you present and the peace. Never is there enough of that. Thank you for sharing. Have a wonderful afternoon. And yes, make the most of that wooden bench when you find it for it will reveal much. Blessings and love always.
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