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Nature's Test

An eyrie of bald eagles stir, waking to the fresh morning air. Preening and primming flight feathers grooming each with diligent care. Flies buzz around yesterday's scraps, fueled by the rays of the sun. And shifting shadows disappear, darkness defeated, dawn has won. While perched high on a rocky crag, their keen eyes soon survey the land. And with uncanny precision, vast hunting grounds are swiftly scanned. Hungry eaglets flex flightless wings forming formidable muscles. And food brought by the parent birds oft instigates sibling tussles. Calling out and circling close by, eagles urge chicks to leave the nest. And for the first time, fledglings flap feathered wings, passing nature's test. (Quatrain) 07/19/2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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DiMino Avatar
July 23, 2020 at 7:15 AM
Perfect! Never been said better. Eagles are my favorites -- oops, you too kitty, my cat just gave me a dirty look. Great writing my friend!
Pinet Avatar
July 23, 2020 at 10:21 AM
Thanks Joe, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Daniel Avatar
July 22, 2020 at 6:42 AM
Brilliant, I could imagine the scene, Emile:)
Pinet Avatar
July 22, 2020 at 12:12 PM
Thanks Jo, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Sands Avatar
July 19, 2020 at 2:39 PM
Nice one Emile! I hope all is well :)
Pinet Avatar
July 19, 2020 at 5:36 PM
Thanks Heidi, all is well with myself, I hope the same goes for you, stay safe my friend, Emile.
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