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An eyrie of bald eagles stir, waking to the fresh morning air. Preening and primming flight feathers grooming each with diligent care. Flies buzz around yesterday's scraps, fueled by the rays of the sun. And shifting shadows disappear, darkness defeated, dawn has won. While perched high on a rocky crag, their keen eyes soon survey the land. And with uncanny precision, vast hunting grounds are swiftly scanned. Hungry eaglets flex flightless wings forming formidable muscles. And food brought by the parent birds oft instigates sibling tussles. Calling out and circling close by, eagles urge chicks to leave the nest. And for the first time, fledglings flap feathered wings, passing nature's test. (Quatrain) 07/19/2020

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Date: 7/23/2020 7:15:00 AM
Perfect! Never been said better. Eagles are my favorites -- oops, you too kitty, my cat just gave me a dirty look. Great writing my friend!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/23/2020 10:21:00 AM
Thanks Joe, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/22/2020 6:42:00 AM
Brilliant, I could imagine the scene, Emile:)
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Date: 7/22/2020 12:12:00 PM
Thanks Jo, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/19/2020 2:39:00 PM
Nice one Emile! I hope all is well :)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/19/2020 5:36:00 PM
Thanks Heidi, all is well with myself, I hope the same goes for you, stay safe my friend, Emile.

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