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Nature's Tempest - Collab

Wearied by our crass negligence, Troubled by our stern ploy, We're blinded to the evidence, Nonchalant to her joy. Consumed by our intelligence, We obtain and destroy. Disrupting nature's elements, Anguish our hands employ. Joanna Daniel's Part Plundered by greed's malevolence, Her patterns, we annoy, Though nature in her elegance, Blessings, let us enjoy. Ashamed by our impenitence, When will we change deploy? Let's not exploit benevolence, Not use her like our toy March 29, 2023. Collaborate With Me Poetry Contest, Joanna Daniel. Rhyme Scheme: abab Syllable Count: 8686

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Date: 3/30/2023 1:02:00 PM
Hi Thompson, Congratulations on your win. Well done. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Date: 3/30/2023 1:20:00 PM
Thank you, Alexis. I'm honoured.
Date: 3/30/2023 8:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning write, Thompson. This is excellent!
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Thompson Emate
Date: 3/30/2023 1:19:00 PM
Thank you, Daniel. It's an honour.
Date: 3/30/2023 7:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Thompson! :)
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Thompson Emate
Date: 3/30/2023 1:18:00 PM
Thank you, Linda. I'm honoured.
Date: 3/30/2023 6:25:00 AM
Tough to collaborate with, but I enjoyed the challenge, congratulations, Emate:) great message:)
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Date: 3/30/2023 1:18:00 PM
Thank you, Joanna. It's an honour.

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