Notes About The Poem

Nature's Lesson To Humanity

Sunshine fields, warm smiles of hues as green fade.
Nature whispers to creatures, season change; 
rustling reddish, tan, golden leaves arrayed.
Gnarly old tree deep raw umber shades range.

Highest out stretched bough grasp the fraying rope 
the back and forth sway, two in solitude 
on a woven hemp hammock full of hope. 
No fantasy or strife did here intrude.

Wild beast hide in the bosom of the earth
in fear of human that are blind and won't
listen to their breathtaking beauty's worth
and needs until they banish if they don't!

Grand problems that may threaten the planet,
plants, animals will no longer stand-it.

10/21/2017

Poem entered : All about the environment. 
Poetry Contest: Second Chance Contest 
sponsored by; Richard Lamoure
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Kauffman Avatar
February 17, 2020 at 11:22 PM
Eve, Congratulations! Your central theme is so vividly portrayed weaving together human relationshps and the world around us.
Lamoureux Avatar
February 17, 2020 at 9:45 AM
Congrats on your second place in my second chance contest. Thanks for entering. Hugs Rick.
Haight Avatar
December 9, 2017 at 4:12 PM
Such an important message in your well-written Sonnet, Eve. Congratulations on your win! Hugs, Sandra
Talbot Avatar
December 7, 2017 at 8:33 PM
The truth in your poem found, A poet of the same ilk, that's sound. It seems though that words are not enough, We need to get out there and do some stuff. Show folk what their missing, Nature all around them wishing. That we humans would implement the solution, To fix the climate stop pollution! Congratulations to you too Eve, best seasonal wishes, Mick PS: Going to post my poetic reply as a dedication to your good self. :)
Tripp Avatar
December 7, 2017 at 6:20 PM
Congratulations on your win, Dear.
Michaels Avatar
December 7, 2017 at 1:54 PM
Nicely done, Eve. Congratulations on your win! Regards, John.
Vacek Avatar
December 7, 2017 at 1:51 PM
Eve, Judging these contests is so much fun. I see the changes taking place before my very eyes. In MN, we regularly now see possum. Birds that normally winter farther south, can be found here year round. I joke with people that Global Warming keeps increasing my property's value, But in all seriousness, We need to stiop arguing abut terms and statistics and start acting.
Smith Avatar
October 21, 2017 at 12:40 PM
Great entry Eve, spot on...
Roper Avatar
October 21, 2017 at 12:59 PM
Thank you, Charlie Hugs Eve ~`*
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