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Nature's Innate Beauty

Listen as brisk breezes begin singing amidst the rustling leaves. And children laugh, caught up in play, gathering dried leaves in the fall. Autumn dabbles in abstract art, tapping its palette's deepest depths. And blending cerise with scarlet captures nature's innate beauty. But beauty is a fragile thing that disappears rather quickly. And Autumn's last breath sends shivers that rattle the trees late at night. Flurries carpet a rich landscape with a fluffy, puffy duvet. While winter's white flakes fall freely, like feathers tumbling in the wind. (Blank Verse/ Lipogram No Letter "o") 08/19/2020

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Date: 1/26/2022 10:16:00 PM
"brisk breezes begin", "Autumn dabbles in abstract art" - Beautiful. Congratulations!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/27/2022 6:41:00 AM
Thanks, Christuraj, you brought a smile to my day my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/21/2020 4:45:00 PM
wow Emile i didnt realise it was a lipogram as well as an excellent blank verse and has superb alliteration - i adore "Autumn dabbles in abstract art, tapping its palette's deepest depths. " that line is truly beautiful:-) many congrats:-) hugs jan xx
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/21/2020 6:38:00 PM
Thanks Jan, you have managed to make my day my friend, much appreciated, Emile.
Date: 8/21/2020 3:44:00 PM
AND a big Congrats too :)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/21/2020 3:57:00 PM
Thanks again Regina, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/21/2020 3:43:00 PM
My favorite season and a gentle touch of words from your pen - You flavor the season so beautifully. God bless you
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/21/2020 3:57:00 PM
Thanks Regina, you brought a smile to my day my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/19/2020 7:23:00 PM
Clever, simple, touching tribute to changing seasons. Respect your form, vision, and vowel exclusion.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/20/2020 5:40:00 AM
Thanks Sigrid, I always enjoy your reviews my friend, Emile.

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