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Nature's Echoes

The pulse of morning, Water speaks by soothing waves; As the forest breathes.

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Steve Edmonds

Date: 3/29/2009 9:50:00 AM

Peaceful sounds echoing at all hours. great job

Daniel Neal

Date: 3/27/2009 3:18:00 AM

Serene write your heart writes, in fact they are awesome. DN

Danielle Moreno

Date: 3/25/2009 2:25:00 AM

The forest breathes, nice way of ending it................Danielle

Chris Goombi

Date: 3/25/2009 1:33:00 AM

Nice opening and ending.

Elizabeth Neal

Date: 3/24/2009 7:22:00 PM

Nice descriptions of the sounds. Love E.

Tyler Martin

Date: 3/23/2009 10:52:00 PM

The echoes illustrate a divine feel. Nice job. Tyler

Abe Lopez

Date: 3/23/2009 3:24:00 PM

The forest breathes, nice line.

Sharon Winter

Date: 3/22/2009 6:20:00 AM

This is so soothing and beautiful. Makes me wish I lived near a forest and river. Sigh. Awesome haiku, one of my favs.

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 3/21/2009 9:47:00 PM

Excellent word choices... exquisite imagery and flow. Well done Raul!! Best wishes, Keith

Jane Bowen

Date: 3/21/2009 7:00:00 PM

Great imagery and expression here in this haiku Raul~! Your descriptions are perfect...it soothes the reader...nicely done...excellent creation of words...Take care of you! Janers

Laurie Ginn

Date: 3/21/2009 5:54:00 PM

Peaceful easy and inviting. Nice job Raul

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 3/21/2009 4:13:00 PM

Oh my, this is so quiet and tender..good one. BG

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/21/2009 1:37:00 PM

The serenity speaks so softly in this lovely haiku, Raul! So nicely done! ~ Carrie

Date: 3/21/2009 11:58:00 AM

The imagery paints a picture with words in this one. Nice use of personification. Thank you for sharing this enjoyable poem with us and for your kind comments on mine. Keep on writing! Karen

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/21/2009 9:54:00 AM

A beautiful image, Raul. Love the way the forest breathes and the water speaks. Nice haiku!