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Nature's Echoes

The pulse of morning,
Water speaks by soothing waves;
As the forest breathes.

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Steve Edmonds

March 29, 2009 at 9:50 AM

Peaceful sounds echoing at all hours. great job

Daniel Neal

March 27, 2009 at 3:18 AM

Serene write your heart writes, in fact they are awesome. DN

Danielle Moreno

March 25, 2009 at 2:25 AM

The forest breathes, nice way of ending it................Danielle

Chris Goombi

March 25, 2009 at 1:33 AM

Nice opening and ending.

Elizabeth Neal

March 24, 2009 at 7:22 PM

Nice descriptions of the sounds. Love E.

Tyler Martin

March 23, 2009 at 10:52 PM

The echoes illustrate a divine feel. Nice job. Tyler

Abe Lopez

March 23, 2009 at 3:24 PM

The forest breathes, nice line.

Sharon Winter

March 22, 2009 at 6:20 AM

This is so soothing and beautiful. Makes me wish I lived near a forest and river. Sigh. Awesome haiku, one of my favs.

Keith Bickerstaffe

March 21, 2009 at 9:47 PM

Excellent word choices... exquisite imagery and flow. Well done Raul!! Best wishes, Keith

Jane Bowen

March 21, 2009 at 7:00 PM

Great imagery and expression here in this haiku Raul~! Your descriptions are perfect...it soothes the reader...nicely done...excellent creation of words...Take care of you! Janers

Laurie Ginn

March 21, 2009 at 5:54 PM

Peaceful easy and inviting. Nice job Raul

Barbara Gorelick

March 21, 2009 at 4:13 PM

Oh my, this is so quiet and tender..good one. BG

Carrie Richards

March 21, 2009 at 1:37 PM

The serenity speaks so softly in this lovely haiku, Raul! So nicely done! ~ Carrie

March 21, 2009 at 11:58 AM

The imagery paints a picture with words in this one. Nice use of personification. Thank you for sharing this enjoyable poem with us and for your kind comments on mine. Keep on writing! Karen