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From the fairest fresh of spring, beauty thrives in blissful wonder so do with youthful invitations cling to arms that cast this spell I'm under. All dreams replete in perfect rhyme before a single furrow's sewn in no less mockery of time the hand of God hath surely grown. If left to peace and of its own, this will creates by its device for purpose pure, its poem known that leads the way to paradise. Choices lived in festival, Captivate life's carnival.

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Date: 11/12/2017 8:55:00 AM
This poem is so beautiful. Nature is one of my favourite topics.
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Date: 11/12/2017 9:27:00 AM
Thank you Harshita...
Date: 8/22/2017 3:24:00 PM
the line " that leads the way to paradise." is really the ultimate goal I think Charlie. To give and receive love wholly, respect nature, to be at peace. A charming poem with beautiful meaning that is inspiring to read. a fave
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Date: 8/22/2017 8:07:00 PM
Thank you Lynn...
Date: 6/13/2017 9:14:00 PM
Flows like a clear and gentle river that empties into a wondrous sea of bliss my talented friend. A brilliant and inspiring sonnet and a fav for me....
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Date: 6/14/2017 7:38:00 AM
Thank you so much Robert.
Date: 6/10/2017 9:18:00 AM
This is excellent Charlie! I love it :)
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Date: 6/10/2017 10:28:00 AM
Thank you Heidi.
Date: 5/22/2017 9:42:00 AM
Nice rhythmic sonnet, Charlie, very creative with the short lines, makes it sound as fresh as the carnival of Nature:) a 7:)
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Date: 5/22/2017 12:11:00 PM
Thank you Jo.
Date: 5/21/2017 6:31:00 PM
Lovely imagery, Charlie! Well done. Regards, John.
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Date: 5/21/2017 7:23:00 PM
Thank you John.
Date: 5/20/2017 4:23:00 PM
A unique swift flowing sonnet written in a fresh style of your own, Charlie. A 7+ for content and originality. Regards // paul
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Date: 5/20/2017 6:15:00 PM
Thank you Paul. Thank
Date: 5/20/2017 9:37:00 AM
I like the mood and feel of this piece Charlie.
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Date: 5/20/2017 6:14:00 PM
Thank you Richard.
Date: 5/19/2017 3:39:00 PM
Beautifully written with peaceful imagery soothing to the soul, Charlie. 7 Sandra
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Date: 5/19/2017 9:00:00 PM
Thank you Sandra.
Date: 5/19/2017 9:30:00 AM
A very lyrical sonnet, Charlie. One with shorter lines and I really enjoyed it.
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Date: 5/19/2017 11:15:00 AM
Thank you Andrea.
Date: 5/18/2017 4:19:00 PM
Hello Charlie. Allow me to simply say this is original and well executed. I very much enjoyed the title to which you did not stray. Well done completely.
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Date: 5/19/2017 11:15:00 AM
Thank you Lisa...
Date: 5/18/2017 1:25:00 PM
Beautifully written sonnet Charlie..
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Date: 5/19/2017 11:15:00 AM
Thanks Joseph.
Date: 5/17/2017 4:23:00 PM
Cool and clever ending, Charlie. A very skillfully written sonnet. I like ... I like it a lot. Excellent poem. A 7! Love and joy to you, my friend.
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Date: 5/18/2017 1:13:00 AM
So good .to hear from you again Freddie my friend, thank you...
Date: 5/16/2017 12:03:00 PM
Peace will surely lead to paradise if we keep hold of the hand of God. He created nature, a festival to behold. You've captured the beauty in this write, Charlie.
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Date: 5/17/2017 11:38:00 AM
Thank you Lin.
Date: 5/16/2017 11:59:00 AM
- Behind the mask ... we can see the beauty - A lovely poem, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/17/2017 11:38:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise.

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