Charlie Smith Poet Sonnet

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Natures Carnival

From the fairest fresh of spring,
beauty thrives in blissful wonder
so do with youthful invitations cling
to arms that cast this spell I'm under.

All dreams replete in perfect rhyme
before a single furrow's sewn
in no less mockery of time
the hand of God hath surely grown.

If left to peace and of its own,
this will creates by its device
for purpose pure, its poem known
that leads the way to paradise.

Choices lived in festival,
Captivate life's carnival.

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Harshita Chaudhary November 12, 2017 at 8:55 AM This poem is so beautiful. Nature is one of my favourite topics. Charlie Smith November 12, 2017 at 9:27 AM Thank you Harshita...

Lynn Marie August 22, 2017 at 3:24 PM the line " that leads the way to paradise." is really the ultimate goal I think Charlie. To give and receive love wholly, respect nature, to be at peace. A charming poem with beautiful meaning that is inspiring to read. a fave Charlie Smith August 22, 2017 at 8:07 PM Thank you Lynn...

Robert Lindley June 13, 2017 at 9:14 PM Flows like a clear and gentle river that empties into a wondrous sea of bliss my talented friend. A brilliant and inspiring sonnet and a fav for me.... Charlie Smith June 14, 2017 at 7:38 AM Thank you so much Robert.

Heidi Sands June 10, 2017 at 9:18 AM This is excellent Charlie! I love it :) Charlie Smith June 10, 2017 at 10:28 AM Thank you Heidi.

Joanna Daniel May 22, 2017 at 9:42 AM Nice rhythmic sonnet, Charlie, very creative with the short lines, makes it sound as fresh as the carnival of Nature:) a 7:) Charlie Smith May 22, 2017 at 12:11 PM Thank you Jo.

John Michaels May 21, 2017 at 6:31 PM Lovely imagery, Charlie! Well done. Regards, John. Charlie Smith May 21, 2017 at 7:23 PM Thank you John.

Paul Callus May 20, 2017 at 4:23 PM A unique swift flowing sonnet written in a fresh style of your own, Charlie. A 7+ for content and originality. Regards // paul Charlie Smith May 20, 2017 at 6:15 PM Thank you Paul. Thank

Richard Lamoureux May 20, 2017 at 9:37 AM I like the mood and feel of this piece Charlie. Charlie Smith May 20, 2017 at 6:14 PM Thank you Richard.

Sandra Haight May 19, 2017 at 3:39 PM Beautifully written with peaceful imagery soothing to the soul, Charlie. 7 Sandra Charlie Smith May 19, 2017 at 9:00 PM Thank you Sandra.

Andrea Dietrich May 19, 2017 at 9:30 AM A very lyrical sonnet, Charlie. One with shorter lines and I really enjoyed it. Charlie Smith May 19, 2017 at 11:15 AM Thank you Andrea.

Lisa Ricci May 18, 2017 at 4:19 PM Hello Charlie. Allow me to simply say this is original and well executed. I very much enjoyed the title to which you did not stray. Well done completely. Charlie Smith May 19, 2017 at 11:15 AM Thank you Lisa...

Joseph May May 18, 2017 at 1:25 PM Beautifully written sonnet Charlie.. Charlie Smith May 19, 2017 at 11:15 AM Thanks Joseph.

Freddie Robinson Jr. May 17, 2017 at 4:23 PM Cool and clever ending, Charlie. A very skillfully written sonnet. I like ... I like it a lot. Excellent poem. A 7! Love and joy to you, my friend. Charlie Smith May 18, 2017 at 1:13 AM So good .to hear from you again Freddie my friend, thank you...

Lin Lane May 16, 2017 at 12:03 PM Peace will surely lead to paradise if we keep hold of the hand of God. He created nature, a festival to behold. You've captured the beauty in this write, Charlie. Charlie Smith May 17, 2017 at 11:38 AM Thank you Lin.

Anne-Lise Andresen May 16, 2017 at 11:59 AM - Behind the mask ... we can see the beauty - A lovely poem, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Charlie Smith May 17, 2017 at 11:38 AM Thank you Anne-Lise.