Natures Carnival

From the fairest fresh of spring,
beauty thrives in blissful wonder
so do with youthful invitations cling
to arms that cast this spell I'm under.

All dreams replete in perfect rhyme
before a single furrow's sewn
in no less mockery of time
the hand of God hath surely grown.

If left to peace and of its own,
this will creates by its device
for purpose pure, its poem known
that leads the way to paradise.

Choices lived in festival,
Captivate life's carnival.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 11/12/2017 8:55:00 AM
This poem is so beautiful. Nature is one of my favourite topics.
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Charlie Smith
Date: 11/12/2017 9:27:00 AM
Thank you Harshita...
Date: 8/22/2017 3:24:00 PM
the line " that leads the way to paradise." is really the ultimate goal I think Charlie. To give and receive love wholly, respect nature, to be at peace. A charming poem with beautiful meaning that is inspiring to read. a fave
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Charlie Smith
Date: 8/22/2017 8:07:00 PM
Thank you Lynn...
Date: 6/13/2017 9:14:00 PM
Flows like a clear and gentle river that empties into a wondrous sea of bliss my talented friend. A brilliant and inspiring sonnet and a fav for me....
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Charlie Smith
Date: 6/14/2017 7:38:00 AM
Thank you so much Robert.
Date: 6/10/2017 9:18:00 AM
This is excellent Charlie! I love it :)
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Charlie Smith
Date: 6/10/2017 10:28:00 AM
Thank you Heidi.
Date: 5/22/2017 9:42:00 AM
Nice rhythmic sonnet, Charlie, very creative with the short lines, makes it sound as fresh as the carnival of Nature:) a 7:)
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Charlie Smith
Date: 5/22/2017 12:11:00 PM
Thank you Jo.
Date: 5/21/2017 6:31:00 PM
Lovely imagery, Charlie! Well done. Regards, John.
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Charlie Smith
Date: 5/21/2017 7:23:00 PM
Thank you John.
Date: 5/20/2017 4:23:00 PM
A unique swift flowing sonnet written in a fresh style of your own, Charlie. A 7+ for content and originality. Regards // paul
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Charlie Smith
Date: 5/20/2017 6:15:00 PM
Thank you Paul. Thank
Date: 5/20/2017 9:37:00 AM
I like the mood and feel of this piece Charlie.
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Charlie Smith
Date: 5/20/2017 6:14:00 PM
Thank you Richard.
Date: 5/19/2017 3:39:00 PM
Beautifully written with peaceful imagery soothing to the soul, Charlie. 7 Sandra
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Charlie Smith
Date: 5/19/2017 9:00:00 PM
Thank you Sandra.
Date: 5/19/2017 9:30:00 AM
A very lyrical sonnet, Charlie. One with shorter lines and I really enjoyed it.
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Charlie Smith
Date: 5/19/2017 11:15:00 AM
Thank you Andrea.
Date: 5/18/2017 4:19:00 PM
Hello Charlie. Allow me to simply say this is original and well executed. I very much enjoyed the title to which you did not stray. Well done completely.
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Charlie Smith
Date: 5/19/2017 11:15:00 AM
Thank you Lisa...
Date: 5/18/2017 1:25:00 PM
Beautifully written sonnet Charlie..
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Charlie Smith
Date: 5/19/2017 11:15:00 AM
Thanks Joseph.
Date: 5/17/2017 4:23:00 PM
Cool and clever ending, Charlie. A very skillfully written sonnet. I like ... I like it a lot. Excellent poem. A 7! Love and joy to you, my friend.
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Charlie Smith
Date: 5/18/2017 1:13:00 AM
So good .to hear from you again Freddie my friend, thank you...
Date: 5/16/2017 12:03:00 PM
Peace will surely lead to paradise if we keep hold of the hand of God. He created nature, a festival to behold. You've captured the beauty in this write, Charlie.
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Charlie Smith
Date: 5/17/2017 11:38:00 AM
Thank you Lin.
Date: 5/16/2017 11:59:00 AM
- Behind the mask ... we can see the beauty - A lovely poem, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Charlie Smith
Date: 5/17/2017 11:38:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise.
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