Natural Rhythm

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A Jinjagoliath poem:
First published: 1st April 2022
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I feel there's something heavy Pressing on my bones Medusa's gaze has got me Turning into stone.. My life needs new perspective Like some higher place to view A log jam in my thinking Or my prayers desire review It's noisy and unsettling I cannot find that space Where I sit and welcome stillness To caress and kiss my face A wild storm shouts around me And the structures rattle out I need peace and understanding To explain that noise without Or maybe just the quiet, Silent place within Is the park bench where I settle While the world creates it's din As in nature's restful bosom I can reconnect again As trees dance to the birdsong And the rhythm of the rain.

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Christina Bowring

Date: 6/19/2024 3:34:00 PM

Dear Chris, this beautiful poem really resonates with me as it will so many. We all, at times, need peace and solitude and perhaps some more than others. I think stillness really does reset our natural rhythm. I like the image of your park bench and it must be a blessing on work days! One of my favourite spiritual sayings is, ‘ I’m with myself when alone’ and at those times, soul is more aware of higher powers than ever. The need to reconnect not just with nature but with oneself as well.

Christopher Grieves
Date: 6/19/2024 7:40:00 PM

Hi Christina x so wonderful to have you visit! Reconnecting and resetting are so very important for spiritual health - you obviously understand that. I have a favourite park bench that is opposite a small hill. In the Spring it is awash with daffodils and quite beautiful. Thank you for your presence here and touching encouragement, Christina C :) xx

Christina Bowring
Date: 6/19/2024 3:36:00 PM

I particularly loved the last stanza. Delightful! Thank you for sharing this insightful poem my friend. Loved it :) x

Karen Jones

Date: 3/26/2024 12:28:00 AM

Christopher I can relate to needing and finding inner peace on a park bench! Enjoyed reading your words!

Christopher Grieves
Date: 3/26/2024 6:34:00 AM

Thank you Karen! As the weather warms.. those park benches certainly appear luxuriant. May you find yours for recovery and re-energising your spirit. Blessings, Cx