Native Winds

Reciting earth tales,
Echoing past memories:
Wind songs whistle on.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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George   Avatar
August 28, 2009 at 12:34 AM
What a beautiful Haiku, dear Raul. Lainie
Chamma Avatar
August 27, 2009 at 10:11 AM
Wonderful Haiku as usual...Thank you for sharing.. Always, Farah
Mason Avatar
August 22, 2009 at 12:07 PM
Powerful write here with lots said in very few words ... smile ... you are very adept at this form, Raul!!
Burton Avatar
August 21, 2009 at 6:32 PM
short and beautiful poetry here... really enjoyed it alot and enjoy your weekend! :)
Lopez Avatar
August 20, 2009 at 9:35 AM
Awsome thought .......everywhere we step there is a history to be found!
Goff Avatar
August 18, 2009 at 8:26 PM
I see 'Native Peoples' verbal histories handed down to each generation! cool! Raul, jim
Mckenzie Avatar
August 16, 2009 at 5:56 PM
Raul~~Excellent Haiku I love this one! Laura :)
Higgins Avatar
August 16, 2009 at 4:00 PM
This is another written with force that makes my mind dance...excellent writing.
Fraser Avatar
August 16, 2009 at 1:49 PM
Beautiful poem Raul, i enjoy poems on the Native Indians>>James
Knox Avatar
August 16, 2009 at 12:24 PM
great work here ... keep it up :)
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August 16, 2009 at 11:49 AM
What a creative view. Blessings to you for sharing your talent with us. Keep on writing. Karen
Richards Avatar
August 16, 2009 at 8:29 AM
This does (as Carolyn said) feel like a Native American chant....lovely images of wind whisking through canyon country....That is the picture I have in my head. Lovely!!
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August 15, 2009 at 11:40 PM
I get a sense of Native American "earth tales" in this haiku, Raul. Quite a special write! Love, Carolyn
Freeman Avatar
August 15, 2009 at 11:09 PM
I think I got it, a bit windy, Sincerely, Moses
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