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Native Winds

Reciting earth tales, Echoing past memories: Wind songs whistle on.

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Elaine George

Date: 8/28/2009 12:34:00 AM

What a beautiful Haiku, dear Raul. Lainie

Farah Chamma

Date: 8/27/2009 10:11:00 AM

Wonderful Haiku as usual...Thank you for sharing.. Always, Farah

Sue Mason

Date: 8/22/2009 12:07:00 PM

Powerful write here with lots said in very few words ... smile ... you are very adept at this form, Raul!!

Derrick Burton

Date: 8/21/2009 6:32:00 PM

short and beautiful poetry here... really enjoyed it alot and enjoy your weekend! :)

Abe Lopez

Date: 8/20/2009 9:35:00 AM

Awsome thought .......everywhere we step there is a history to be found!

James Marshall Goff

Date: 8/18/2009 8:26:00 PM

I see 'Native Peoples' verbal histories handed down to each generation! cool! Raul, jim

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 8/16/2009 5:56:00 PM

Raul~~Excellent Haiku I love this one! Laura :)

Christopher Higgins

Date: 8/16/2009 4:00:00 PM

This is another written with force that makes my mind dance...excellent writing.

James Fraser

Date: 8/16/2009 1:49:00 PM

Beautiful poem Raul, i enjoy poems on the Native Indians>>James

James Knox

Date: 8/16/2009 12:24:00 PM

great work here ... keep it up :)

Date: 8/16/2009 11:49:00 AM

What a creative view. Blessings to you for sharing your talent with us. Keep on writing. Karen

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/16/2009 8:29:00 AM

This does (as Carolyn said) feel like a Native American chant....lovely images of wind whisking through canyon country....That is the picture I have in my head. Lovely!!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/15/2009 11:40:00 PM

I get a sense of Native American "earth tales" in this haiku, Raul. Quite a special write! Love, Carolyn

John Freeman

Date: 8/15/2009 11:09:00 PM

I think I got it, a bit windy, Sincerely, Moses