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Narcissus

Beauty speaks in vivid colours In soft sweet tones of hues and tints; Truth curls within scented odours As floral cones hurl pretty mints. Can you not see that tragic play Where youth most odd fell deep and dark? Yet what may be a loss that day Is tale of sod in craft that sparks. A stroke of fate culls destiny As drowning lad in frenzy mad; Thus heed time late old tragedy Makes something bad void of thoughts glad. Narcissus saw in waters clear: A sense of awe most lovely dear. Leon Enriquez 21 November 2017 Singapore

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Date: 11/25/2017 5:30:00 AM
Now I am really worried about you. No poems in four days. This has never happened before. Jim Horn
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Leon Enriquez
Date: 11/25/2017 12:48:00 PM
Dear James: Thank you for your kind observation and concern my friend. I've been down with a flu bug and bad cough. Getting back to my normal self once again. In fact, I wrote a poem "AWAY" about this. Please take a look, Jim. All my best to you, Leon.
Date: 11/21/2017 9:24:00 AM
And life continues on and on until to heaven we have gone. Glad you are back. Write a poem about what you did while not posting poems to Poetry Soup. I am shooting to be number three. Jim Horn
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Leon Enriquez
Date: 11/21/2017 5:03:00 PM
Dear Jim: Go for it. All the best then. Thank you for noticing my absence these past 3 days without posting a poem. Leon

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