Narcissa

It is an early spring dawning with flowers all around.
The morning dew creates a mirror on the ground.
Here, the beautiful image of a woman can be found.
The blooms smell so sweet, but she can’t hear a sound.

Narcissa, that is the wondrous female that you see.
You are so attractive upon reaching puberty.
Yes, that is the stage of physiological maturity.
Anyone can say you are the personification of beauty.

With all of your silk and lace, you are now fully grown.
Any young man in the world would want you for his own.
Knights and heroes will be crawling at your feet.
Each one of them will discover that you are sweet.

By Robert Pettit for the “Reflection” contest sponsored by
Constance LaFrance-A Rambling Poet.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Haick Avatar
March 3, 2011 at 2:03 PM
Congratulations on your very fine win in the contest, Robert! Another one so well-deserving of a win, also. Always, Annalise
Fraser Avatar
March 2, 2011 at 11:55 AM
Congratulations Robert on your fine win in Constance's wonderful contest....:)
Dietrich Avatar
March 1, 2011 at 1:29 PM
finally reviewing the winners here, way to go in the contest, robert. It was a great poem!
Brown Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 8:02 AM
Congratulations on your win Robert in Constance's contest "Reflection". Love, Carol
Neels Avatar
February 27, 2011 at 1:52 PM
Hey there Robert, congratulations on your win in Constance's contest :)
Johnson Avatar
February 26, 2011 at 5:04 PM
Congratulations on your win Robert. Well done. Love, Joyce
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February 26, 2011 at 4:40 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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February 26, 2011 at 11:03 AM
Congrats Robert on your wonderful win in the Reflections contest... so happy to be sharing the winners list with a good friend luv..
Freeman Avatar
February 26, 2011 at 7:47 AM
Great Job Robert, good to see you at the top again. Congratulations on your worthy poem's fifth place honor in Constance's inspiring contest. Agape, Moses
Gorelick Avatar
February 26, 2011 at 6:12 AM
A great name..I love flower names and what you did with it.. Congrats to you. BG
Maverick Avatar
February 25, 2011 at 10:52 PM
wonderfull to see your win today Robert' all best wishes.
Mannan Avatar
February 25, 2011 at 8:02 PM
This had to be a winner. It is lovely. Many congratulations for this big win.
Poet Avatar
February 25, 2011 at 6:46 PM
Congrats Robert on your well deserved win in the contest of Constance.----kashinath
Onclaud Avatar
February 25, 2011 at 6:27 PM
really sweet, robert..my best hurrah for your win..:) huggs, nette
Mehta Avatar
February 25, 2011 at 5:47 PM
Congratulations on the fifth place win in the contest of Constance, Robert
Camp Avatar
February 18, 2011 at 9:57 AM
Robert, Another excellent poem. Thanks for sharing. Elton
Roberts Avatar
February 17, 2011 at 10:16 PM
interesting interprutation of Constance's contest, nice ryming and imagery, good luck in the contest
Dietrich Avatar
February 17, 2011 at 9:51 PM
And this is one sweet poem. It will be so interesting to see all the names this beautiful picture invokes in people! Good luck in the contest!
La France Avatar
February 17, 2011 at 9:36 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest.
Mannan Avatar
February 17, 2011 at 8:59 PM
A perfect beauty. All the best for the contest.
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