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Naked Thoughts

. Quietly mine silly thoughts rushed about One if silent could hear thundering palpitations bursting through mine chest and if the same soul peered into mine eyes undress

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Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 3/16/2012 7:19:00 AM

Ah James, those thundring palpitations are just a memory now; have to be content with the warmth that occasionally lights the fire! :)

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 6/11/2010 8:44:00 AM

The essence of the poem is consistent with the title. The flow of the words is also right on point. Great job! Joseph

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 6/4/2010 5:28:00 AM

These silly thoughts are so beautiful,and so the poet's verse!Corva :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/1/2010 7:42:00 PM

Lovely lyrical lines James.. your title caught me eye of course.. haha.. being a passionate woman it would.. so glad u enjoyed my entry into the new contest by Constance .. she does inspire and bring out the best in us ... and your way with words is so unique and special James.. and I hope u put your dessert poem in my contest...that u don't enter..luv.. Linda-Marie.."Sweetheart" of P.S.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/31/2010 6:10:00 PM

I enjoyed this well expressed naked thoughts

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/31/2010 1:19:00 PM

Very nice James... now ..did u enter the Lanterne contest as this one is geared for your inspirational writes? ... I know u don't usually enter but this one is a special contest.. and filling up fast... with luv from the "Sweetheart"

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/31/2010 8:33:00 AM

Oh to feel those "thundering palpitations," again, my friend. Thank you for reminding me they still exist in romantic hearts. Hope your "silly thoughts" continue forever! We could use more passion in our lives. Love, Carolyn