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Naked Souls

Naked souls...
Find in each other a kindred spirit
That speaks divinely, without words.
Auras coalesce in euphoric passions
Warming hearts and bodies
That rise to ethereal heights.
Sentient beings aware of the gift
Love employs to infinite degrees,
Valuing the depths of harmonic harmony.
Let sunrise penetrate its heavenly hues
In veneration of nature connecting
With the psyche, intuitive of karmic
Laws in recompense of past regrets.
Unveil the opaque shrouds that keep
Truth occult by delivering the naked soul.

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Allison Avatar
February 12, 2018 at 7:17 AM
Such an uplifting piece connie I know you are such spiritual person named it shines out from every line.when a person finds their kindred spirit they are truly blessed :-) hugs Jan xx
DiMino Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 11:37 PM
Another astoundingly beautiful write! So nice when in spirit, liberated from the physical form solely, to then have ability to dwell freely on multiple planes of experience. Your works are beacons of Light. Thank you for sharing.
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 1, 2018 at 2:22 AM
Thank you Joe for such a beautiful comment. It is much appreciated. : )
De Beaulieu Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 3:20 PM
Connnie this is a great poem.I lkie the first two lines of this poem. The whole poem is beautiful. Have a nice day my friend.
Babcock Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 11:25 AM
A real gem of a poem Connie. Love it. love phyl
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 25, 2018 at 12:59 PM
Thank you very much Phyllis. xxoo
Breedt Avatar
January 20, 2018 at 5:13 AM
Oo yes Connie!! My type of thing this. Depth and wisdom coming together in love so profound that compells the spirit to rise into union. Love Jannie
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 21, 2018 at 10:50 AM
Thank you very much Jannie. It is always so nice to see you visit. I hope all is well. xxoo : )
Boddie Avatar
January 19, 2018 at 1:14 PM
the naked truth is undeniable....the naked mind is the most viable....the naked frame is the most Beautiful for sure....but the naked Soul is humanity's only cure....powerful write connie....;)
Fleming Avatar
January 18, 2018 at 8:18 PM
My goodness, Connie -- what a lovely piece of writing! I could not agree more...this atomic "Interconnectedness" that connects all inanimate and animate things together. Beautifully expressed, Connie! My very warmest regards as always. :) john
Lamoureux Avatar
January 18, 2018 at 12:52 PM
A pleasure to read again.
Ashley Avatar
January 17, 2018 at 8:39 PM
A deep topic Connie beautifully expressed in your lovely poetic lines. I believe our souls have been interconnected beyond and before this physical lifetime an will continue to be afterward as well.. Each soul helping other souls, premeditated and with infinite love, to learn and achieve a higher level of spirituality with each lifetime lived. A glorious write and profound write.. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 18, 2018 at 10:07 AM
I so agree with you Susan. That is exactly how I feel. Thank you so much for your lovely insightful response. xxoo : )
Manassian Avatar
January 16, 2018 at 4:33 PM
To speak divinely without words is a pleasure that few know, my dear. Kindred spirits are rare...but they are described so well through your lines. Hugs
Horsman Avatar
January 14, 2018 at 4:52 PM
awesome poetry Connie, truly a joy to read.
Teagan Avatar
January 13, 2018 at 10:02 PM
we all look for our kindred spirit, someone to go to the depths with. Well expressed, Connie.
Thirtyseven Avatar
January 13, 2018 at 5:54 AM
Truthful and beautiful. Wonderful poetry.
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 14, 2018 at 12:09 PM
Thank you very much my friend. Blessings, Connie : )
Dietrich Avatar
January 12, 2018 at 8:13 PM
connie, did you see the love haiku contest? Go and find a haiku for it! I am seeing nature ones entered too.
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 13, 2018 at 1:18 AM
I entered snow Andrea but had to use his title. I will go see what you entered. Thanks for letting me know. : )
George   Avatar
January 12, 2018 at 6:49 AM
You have truly captured the essence that is the naked soul when all earthly entrapments are removed. Truly a masterpiece, dear Connie. This goes to my fav's. Elaine
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 12, 2018 at 9:15 AM
Elaine, it makes me very happy that you liked this poem enough to Fave it. Thank you so much for your lovely insightful comment. xxoo : )
Michaels Avatar
January 12, 2018 at 5:16 AM
A beautiful piece, elegantly written, Connie. We are all searching for that special other *someone* that we can connect with on a deep emotional and spiritual level... may we one day find them! All the best, John.
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 12, 2018 at 9:18 AM
I so agree John. When we find that soul and connect we feel it instantly. Thank you very much. : )
Godwin Avatar
January 11, 2018 at 5:15 PM
This will be too deep for many readers, but I got it and felt it and concurred with it. Most profound and so truthful, also a shared kinship I could never have summarized as you just did. It is awe to me, Connie. Again, I am impressed by deep almost indiscernible feelings effectively expressed. Love ... CayCay (Wow, I just read below and many did get it)
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 11, 2018 at 9:41 PM
I appreciate that CayCay. I usually write much more simply so that my children and granddaughter can understand what I'm writing about. I explained to Darlene, who was first to reply, what my poem was about. Most got it. Thank you very much for such an insightful comment my friend. xxoo : )
Dietrich Avatar
January 10, 2018 at 6:23 PM
I love how you always choose universal themes like this that impart wisdom with such beauty.
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 11, 2018 at 9:42 PM
Thank you Andrea. You do too. Your poetry always amazes me. : )
Lindley Avatar
January 10, 2018 at 5:55 AM
Truly love this exceptional piece my friend. ""Past Regrets"" verse, my favorite as I deal with so much of that in my own poetry. A FAV MY FRIEND..
A   Avatar
January 9, 2018 at 7:31 PM
A deep write Connie, this for sure makes me happy to have my soul mate... Enjoyed... linda
Michelle Avatar
January 9, 2018 at 12:37 PM
such a striking image of having a naked soul- being open and trusting and unveiled. Such a great write.. Love, Juli-Michelle
Murray Avatar
January 8, 2018 at 1:56 PM
So lovely that idea of souls recognising each other. A rare find here on earth. Just beautiful Connie.
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 8, 2018 at 3:37 PM
Thank you Jean. We are so much more than our bodies. I hope you will have a wonderful New Year my friend. I remember seeing the long hair on the cows when I visited Ireland when it was cold. They looked so cute to me. Happy winter! ; )
Onclaud Avatar
January 8, 2018 at 1:29 PM
wow, i love the descriptive tone of this sultry piece which underscores the value of spiritual leanings, connie... kindred spirit, huggs
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 8, 2018 at 3:39 PM
We were destined to find each other Nette. Thank you very much. : )
Williams Avatar
January 8, 2018 at 1:35 AM
I do believe in reincarnation Connie and glad to see you do too. How else do we account for the feeling of De`ja vu at times? Beautifully expressed.....Maria xxx
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 8, 2018 at 3:43 PM
I feel that we recognize those souls we have been with before when we meet them, and we feel an instant kinship. Thank you Maria. I hope you're having a great new year. : )
Hagy Avatar
January 7, 2018 at 5:10 PM
Wow Connie! Beautiful picture and write :)...freeing to the soul :)
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