Naked

Swimming in the water was my plan,
on the way felt the hotness of the sand,
rolling in wave,
wanted to escape,
bikini gone nudity was banned.







11-10-16
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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November 10, 2016 at 9:11 AM
I've a fondness for the surf! Funny, nice job. Dave
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November 10, 2016 at 9:29 AM
Thanks so much David!:)
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November 10, 2016 at 8:55 AM
Cute one Cheryl lol :)
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November 10, 2016 at 9:29 AM
Thanks so much Heidi!:)
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