For Janice Canerdy's Trimeric poetry contest.
According to Poetry soup and various other syllable counters, 'rhythms' has one syllable, whilst 'rhythm' has two. I used 'rhythms' in this poem as one syllable.
Beneath soft stars and moonlight rays, I watch her dance without a care. Her feet enchant in mystic ways, as gusts entwine through her gold hair. I watch her dance without a care. Her passion lights up the night skies. A blaze ignites within her eyes. Her feet enchant in mystic ways. With swirls and twirls she casts her spell. In rhythms where angel spirits dwell. As gusts entwine through her gold hair, her shadow fades into the dark. In my soul her light leaves its mark.
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