Mystery Pies

Mystery Pies

Every day the thin old lady comes crying from the bakery
“Hot pies!” ‘Hot fresh pies!” 
With a young wide smile on the cobble stone streets
Her wagon filled with savory treats of saffron pumpkin pies
Assorted aromas rise to the horizon as she hobbles down the road  
There is always a surprise, a mystery or two
Children throw their pennies and beg for clues
The old woman bakes a different kind of pie each day
To add to her selections on the cart
Today is Sunday so she baked a special prayer like pie
It has a sinful cinnamon chocolate crust with cherries inside
This reminds the town folk to be pure, to think about virginity.
Don’t ask me why
I’m not from this vicinity

Created on 10/08/14 for Plentitude Of Pies – Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Mehta Avatar
December 9, 2014 at 10:12 AM
Wonderful write, congrats on the win
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December 9, 2014 at 11:46 AM
Thank You Dr. Mehta. I enjoyed your poem for this contest also. Congratulations to you too for a poem well done. Earl
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 9, 2014 at 9:56 AM
Congratulations on your win Earl
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December 9, 2014 at 11:49 AM
Hi Brenda, Thank you so much. I enjoyed your exciting adventurous poem for this contest. Congratulations to you too for your excellent poem and win. Earl
Allison Avatar
December 8, 2014 at 2:24 PM
wish this had placed higher for you Earl - great descriptive write:-) hugs jan xxx
Allison Avatar
December 8, 2014 at 3:50 PM
I don't know what the answer is to get more comments Earl - its famine or feast but i have you on my faves so i always look out for you:-( hugs jan xx
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December 8, 2014 at 3:33 PM
Hi Jan. I have different motives for entering contests. There are very few people who ever read my material. (As is evident in my low numbers next to my poems.) I figure more people will read them if they are part of a contest. As you know, I like to entertain and contests are the next best thing to singing and dancing. (I am not a singer or a dancer.) Thank you for your encouragement. See ya! Earl
Harper Avatar
December 8, 2014 at 11:53 AM
Earl, what a wonderful experience. Thanks for entering the pie contest, truly wonderful submissions sent in.
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December 8, 2014 at 1:55 PM
Hi Sheri, Thank you very much. It was fun. Take care. Earl
May Avatar
October 8, 2014 at 1:42 PM
Great write....good luck in the contest
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October 8, 2014 at 3:57 PM
Good afternoon Joseph, Thank you for commenting. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Have a great day. Earl
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