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Mystery At Midnight

Midnight hour was approaching. . . New Jersey forests hugged each Side of the lonely highway. Tired feet and tired bodies Rested upon worn leather seats In the black stretch limousine Containing three sage pilots And eight stewardesses, who Were all very eager to reach The layover hotel where rest Would soon feel like heaven. No other car lights could be seen. The quiet drone of the limo’s motor Had a lulling affect and a few of The crew had drifted off to sleep. Looking up though the skylight Window, watching the starlit sky, One crew member mentioned The blinking lights in red and green. Soon everyone was careening Their heads to see the craft above. We couldn’t believe our eyes. It was a cigar shaped craft that Seemed to float behind us, blimp Like, with soundless stealth. It was soon apparent that it was Following us at a steady pace. This went on for miles as we drove Though the deep and darkened forest. Our pilots commented that this craft Was unlike any they had ever Encountered before, instilling fear In each of us as we continued to be Under observation by the strange craft. Was this the mother ship of aliens? All of a sudden the cigar shaped craft Seemed to take off at warp speed Disappearing into the deep cobalt sky, Leaving only a memory of its presence Ingrained in our brains for years to come. for Time Warp Contest by Danielle White Note: This happened around 1974 and is the truth as I have written it.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/6/2018 2:09:00 PM
A very mysterious and compelling narrative, Connie. That definitely is one sighting which you recounted to your children and next to your grandchildren! I wonder if at the time you all kept it a secret. ~ Just noticed Daver's comment below...can't believe he is no longer with us! ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 4/19/2013 8:19:00 PM
A longing for Springtime, hint hint!!
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Date: 4/5/2010 10:21:00 PM
Congrats on the win. Fine images conveying meanings nicely
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Date: 4/5/2010 5:27:00 PM
Being followed is no laughing matter. great story Congrats Connie
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Date: 4/5/2010 10:30:00 AM
As a stewardess I bet you had a lot of strange experiences, Connie, and this was very spooky! Very interesting poem. Congratulations on your well-deserved success in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/9/2010 7:50:00 AM
HI, Connie. Andrea Dietrich tells me you are rather spooky like Carolyn Devonshire, myself and a few others. Is your story real? In the Air Force I worked at a radar site. We tracked an object on the PPIs going at an unbelievable rate of speed. This was my only contact, but it was thought provoking. Love, Daver
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Date: 2/26/2010 5:28:00 PM
A scary experience to say the least. I wonder how many people have similar things happen and never tell anyone for fear of being ridiculed... A good write Connie...thank you for comments this morning....Margaret
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Date: 2/23/2010 2:08:00 AM
Grea write Connie, how are you? hope you are well, love Simone
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Date: 2/18/2010 3:09:00 PM
ive had my own expereiences of this subject matter, who knows, maybe one day we will wake up and be like i never expected to see you in a place like this, and then end up home alone before curfee, even though you left the house part definately late Good write
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Date: 2/16/2010 4:17:00 PM
Wow! This has the power of on site journalism. That must have been unique. I think that this one has a chance. Thanks for your kind comments! Regards, Gerard.
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Date: 2/15/2010 5:12:00 PM
so cooooollll!!!!!!!! Connie! extremely well written! jimbo
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Date: 2/15/2010 10:06:00 AM
spooky, ya'll were too tired!!
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Date: 2/13/2010 2:40:00 PM
Wow, that would give me nightmares for life, just wondering about it. Very nicely written, clear and well presented. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. A winner already to me. Keep the pen flowing, dear heart.... Constance
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Date: 2/13/2010 5:45:00 AM
Cool story, Connie. an exciting experience. Would have liked to have been there!
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Date: 2/9/2010 6:49:00 PM
Hi Connie. Eye-catching subject and well written. I had an experience too when I was 16 that I was in denial over for decades. Now, I've accepted what it may have been. Check soupmail. Thanks for sharing this one. David
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Date: 2/9/2010 2:26:00 PM
Wow, connie, I think you could very well have a winner here!! a true story and VERY well written I might add. YOu do great in this type of verse. (I don't even really know what it means to write in slam!!) Best of luck, dear connie, and thanks for your lovely comments! andrea
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Date: 2/8/2010 11:49:00 PM
What an adventure!
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Date: 2/8/2010 10:51:00 PM
Interesting and mysterious story indeed, Connie. Well written. Good luck on the context. And thank you for choosing my for your favorite file. Best wishes, Caroline.
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Date: 2/8/2010 8:59:00 PM
Big brother is with us Connie. I thoroughly believe that. May we be enlighten to their own level of consciousness. Smile. Sincerely, Moses
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Date: 2/8/2010 8:42:00 PM
Wow.. This is a great mystery. -Always Lynette
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Date: 2/8/2010 7:24:00 PM
Terrific entry in Danielle's contest Connie.. it is very mysterious indeed and good luck with this "beauty"... thankxxx for the informative footnote.. and for your comments so special on my poetry tonight... luv.. Linda-Marie.. my entry is Dimension...if u care to read.. luv..
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