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When I'm facing a conundrum I plea The stars way above in lofty skies Alone at the dock overlook the sea Till it vibrates with life before my eyes Ripples of the sea glitter with delight A sailboat drifts idling through the evening Radiant under bright beams of moonlight In perfect dreams would have us believing Swear I see mermaids frolicking about I hear sweet laughter off into the distance They're sent as guides, of that I have no doubt To show me paths, not all of least resistance Faith in the universe, never frightened Calm, I walk away feeling enlightened AP: 1st place 2020, Honorable Mention 2020 Submitted on September 16, 2018 for contest BEAUTIFUL MYSTERY SONNET sponsored by JOHN HAMILTON

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Date: 9/18/2018 7:03:00 PM
You are such a wordsmith. You write so well in contests I don't even consider entering.
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Date: 9/17/2018 3:34:00 AM
Nothing more peaceful than the sea, so theraputic. Lovely sonnet Line. Good luck. Tom
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Date: 9/17/2018 8:23:00 AM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Tom. Most appreciated.
Date: 9/16/2018 11:48:00 PM
Love the imagery, the journey, and the outcome in the final couplet. Best of luck in the contest, Line! :) gw
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Date: 9/16/2018 11:52:00 PM
Thanks you so much, Gershon, for your most appreciated visit and comment.
Date: 9/16/2018 10:51:00 PM
Mysterious AND hopeful. Best of luck in the contest.
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Date: 9/16/2018 11:51:00 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Jesse.
Date: 9/16/2018 10:25:00 PM
many things can be found by the sea, peace of mind is one of them, beautifully written. Thank you Line
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Line Gauthier
Date: 9/16/2018 11:51:00 PM
Absolutely, Pixie. Thanks for your delightful visit and comment.

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