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In my dream, I am walking through the frozen snow, past snow drifts like swans asleep in a wintry meadow; drifting in the cold is the song of a little sparrow- then, many are singing like the low wails of a violin . . . The wind is whispering as the snowflakes begin, like gauzy curtains of infinite white they spin; and in this winter storm, I am lost within- I raise my hands for the filigree flakes of lace . . . The snowflakes soft as a lover's kiss on my face, all through the forest the snow and trees embrace; a winter scene before me where all things interlace- Crystalline ice drips from branches like diamonds . . . I lay myself down to sleep in winter woodlands, dreaming, dreaming of trees with festive garlands; and colorful birds like Christmas balls are thousands- I gasp for breath in the frosty, frigid bitter air . . . It is time to leave this ice-kissed dream- oh tear, I do wish for a warm coat and not this gown threadbare; as now the snowflakes are falling, falling everywhere- In my dream I am wandering in the frozen snow . . . ________________________ December 4, 2017 (Re-post) Poetry/Rhyme/My Winter Dream Copyright Protected, ID 17-1216-354-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Submitted into the contest, Strand Select 11, sponsor, Brian Strand Second Place

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Date: 1/15/2020 5:45:00 PM
Constance, Such an elegant piece - amazing images melded into a dream framework! Congratulations my friend.
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Constance La France
Date: 1/17/2020 3:24:00 PM
Sam thanks for the compliment and the congratulations!
Date: 1/13/2020 5:45:00 PM
You have romanticized snow as only you can do, Constance. This is luxurious.
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Date: 1/14/2020 3:09:00 PM
Caren, thanks so much for the compliment!
Date: 1/13/2020 5:26:00 PM
This is beautiful and dreamy Constance. It should do well in the contest. I love to look at the snowscapes but I feel sorry for anyone who must drive in it. xxoo
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Date: 1/14/2020 3:10:00 PM
Connie thanks for visiting with the beautiful!

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