My Winter

Autumn is leaving, amid hues of red and gold
A final splash of colour before winter's bite takes hold.

The land once verdant, lies desolate and bare
As the cutting cold of winter brings a sharpness to the air.

But as winter takes its grip, and temperatures drop low
Expectantly I wait, looking forward to the snow.

It takes me to my childhood days, of snowball fights at school
Of tongues stuck to frozen railings, by unsuspecting fools.

Neighbours all made snowmen, trying to build the best
And being pleased as punch if ours beat the rest.

Our fingers numb and tingling, our toes were frozen stiff
But we were having so much fun, we thought the snow was bliss.

Innocent days of childhood, it seems so long ago.
But fond memories come flooding back, as I wait upon the snow.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Barden Avatar
December 15, 2017 at 9:29 PM
A sincere congrats on your well-deserved win, Gary - blessings to you, friend! :-)
Smith Avatar
December 16, 2017 at 6:26 AM
Thank you Gregory :)
Pett Avatar
December 1, 2017 at 8:36 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Gary, brings memories of my childhood back, well written. :))
Smith Avatar
December 1, 2017 at 11:56 AM
Thank you Roy :)
Wigley Avatar
November 29, 2017 at 2:59 AM
Congrats, Gary on a warm, reminiscent piece, took me back. well done on your placement. Regards, Viv
Smith Avatar
November 29, 2017 at 6:26 AM
Thank you Viv :)
Ashley Avatar
November 24, 2017 at 6:31 PM
..and I'm right there with you Gary! I love the snow and I love your poem. Your reverie is delightful with snow day imagery and nostalgia. Excellent and enjoyed!
Smith Avatar
November 24, 2017 at 6:51 PM
Thank you Susan :)
Pandit Avatar
November 20, 2017 at 11:56 AM
Beautiful imagery in your poem Gary--well written and executed couplets--nature intertwined with life!
Smith Avatar
November 20, 2017 at 1:04 PM
Thank you Vijay :)
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