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My Winter

Autumn is leaving, amid hues of red and gold A final splash of colour before winter's bite takes hold. The land once verdant, lies desolate and bare As the cutting cold of winter brings a sharpness to the air. But as winter takes its grip, and temperatures drop low Expectantly I wait, looking forward to the snow. It takes me to my childhood days, of snowball fights at school Of tongues stuck to frozen railings, by unsuspecting fools. Neighbours all made snowmen, trying to build the best And being pleased as punch if ours beat the rest. Our fingers numb and tingling, our toes were frozen stiff But we were having so much fun, we thought the snow was bliss. Innocent days of childhood, it seems so long ago. But fond memories come flooding back, as I wait upon the snow.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 12/15/2017 9:29:00 PM
A sincere congrats on your well-deserved win, Gary - blessings to you, friend! :-)
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Gary Smith
Date: 12/16/2017 6:26:00 AM
Thank you Gregory :)
Date: 12/1/2017 8:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Gary, brings memories of my childhood back, well written. :))
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Date: 12/1/2017 11:56:00 AM
Thank you Roy :)
Date: 11/29/2017 2:59:00 AM
Congrats, Gary on a warm, reminiscent piece, took me back. well done on your placement. Regards, Viv
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Gary Smith
Date: 11/29/2017 6:26:00 AM
Thank you Viv :)
Date: 11/24/2017 6:31:00 PM
..and I'm right there with you Gary! I love the snow and I love your poem. Your reverie is delightful with snow day imagery and nostalgia. Excellent and enjoyed!
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Date: 11/24/2017 6:51:00 PM
Thank you Susan :)
Date: 11/20/2017 11:56:00 AM
Beautiful imagery in your poem Gary--well written and executed couplets--nature intertwined with life!
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Gary Smith
Date: 11/20/2017 1:04:00 PM
Thank you Vijay :)

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