'my Winter'

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I was born in a snow storm,
and for that very reason I seem to love winter
with all the lovely filigree snowflakes falling
from the sky.
            Outside my window,
is a pure white winter snow blanket.

     Some would like to just stay warm inside,
not me-   I want to walk in the snow.
A quick breakfast and I dress for winter
with a hat, scarf, mittens, and down-filled coat
oh, and my warmest socks and high boots,
see, I am Canadian and I know all about winter.

     My cat wants to follow me out the door,
but I tell her NO, you will get frostbitten!
Oh, the air is crisp and it is bitter cold
and the trees are frozen soldiers
standing silent guard.
                                 A snowflake kisses me.

     Already a snowplow has cleaned the street,
and people are shoveling their driveways.
Across the street,
          some kids are making a snowman
oh, this brings me back to winter memories
when it was I and my friends playing in the snow.

     Turn, turn back the clock to those winter days,
of yesterday skating, sledding, snowball fights
and making snow angels and later hot chocolate
with gingerbread cookies,
         and we all had rosy cheeks.

    But even nowadays, there is plenty to do,
my city has many outdoor festivals all winter long
and horse carriage rides through downtown!
There is a huge Christmas tree lighting event 
and we boost of the longest skating rink
                            in the whole world.
Where you can get beaver tails to eat (not real)
but a delicious pastry and maple syrup sticks.
Oh, have you ever gone horse back riding in snow!

     I love the Christmas craft fairs,
and the chilly walks around my neighborhood
looking at the flickering house lights and decorations,
there is a peace like no other
         when your feet are creaking in the snow
on a winter night.

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November 17, 2017

Poetry/Free Verse/'My Winter'
Copyright Protected, ID 17-9620-11-0
All Rights Reserved.  Written Under Pseudonym.

Written for the contest, 'My Winter'
sponsor, Viv Wigley

Third  Place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 12/15/2017 9:22:00 PM
A sincere congrats on your well-deserved win, Constance - blessings to you, friend ... love this! :-) <3
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Date: 12/12/2017 11:57:00 AM
This so reminds me of my winters in the Northeast of the U.S. Growing up was very much like this! Ice skating, sledding, hot chocolate .. never felt the cold :) You brought me back with your beautiful words. Such a lovely write BW !!! :)
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Date: 12/1/2017 7:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Broken Wings with this well written poem. :))
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Date: 11/29/2017 3:02:00 PM
Wonderful imagery, Broken Wings, congratulations on this cool crisp write. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 11/29/2017 6:43:00 AM
Beaver tails YUM :) Loved every word <3 Congratulations Lovely! xomo
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Date: 11/29/2017 5:17:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats
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Date: 11/29/2017 2:14:00 AM
Congrats, Constance, on your 3rd in my contest, and I do like 'creaky' snow! Well done, Viv x
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Date: 11/19/2017 1:53:00 PM
Felt like I was strolling with you :) Nice one Constance! I love walking in fresh fallen snow!
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Date: 11/18/2017 6:45:00 AM
There are several things that stick out to me within this write, so wondrous they are to me! I just love the Winter too, it is my second favorite time of the year...Autumn is my favorite! Then there is the Christmas craft fairs...I love those, and I participate in creating the crafts sometimes (If it is something easy I could do...though I'm learning), have you ever cross stitched, that is fun to do, peaceful at times (my wife laughs at me whenever I get that out to do) Great work!!
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Date: 11/18/2017 4:54:00 AM
This is so beautiful BW... I have never experienced snow... But your descriptions make me want to see...
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Date: 11/17/2017 6:33:00 PM
I just love this poem - it lets me know winter without getting cold! I was brought up in the crest of some mountains ridging the desert.
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Date: 11/17/2017 3:21:00 PM
what a beautiful winter poem Constance, good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/17/2017 2:13:00 PM
You described the season beautifully Broken Wings...Great write...
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Date: 11/17/2017 12:17:00 PM
It sounds wonderful, Broken Wings. Though, I must admit that I do stay inside much more that when I was younger. You do evoke wonderful memories. Glad the Beaver tails are not real, can't imagine that that tastes like!!
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