My Way

complicated by your mysterious eyes and then you smiled my way 2/1/2020

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Date: 2/2/2020 7:14:00 PM

the eyes often capture attention first, a smile takes it a step further, first form of communication i think... great monoku :) hugs

Date: 2/2/2020 1:03:00 PM

And then what happened next? Reminds me of George Clooney... Not sure why lol

Silent One
Date: 2/2/2020 3:16:00 PM

oooh a love story blossoming?

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/2/2020 1:30:00 PM

I will have to give that some thought. I have had company this week!

Date: 2/1/2020 11:22:00 PM

A smile can make everything easier!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/2/2020 11:45:00 AM

Yes! I see it all the time where I work. People light up when they smile

Date: 2/1/2020 4:46:00 PM

There was a message in that smile--a moment well captured, Kim--some eyes have that intrigue.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/1/2020 7:39:00 PM

Thank you, dear friend!