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my valentine

my valentine's date
darkly intoxicating ~
a salacious treat

desirepassionsensualsenryu

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/3/2025 9:11:00 AM

Whoa!! I wonder if a new love or an old love reignited. Thanks for sharing. Sara K

Tania Kitchin
Date: 3/3/2025 3:40:00 PM

sara, thank you.

Mohamed Omar

Date: 2/15/2025 8:59:00 AM

Really fascinating and deep

Tania Kitchin
Date: 2/16/2025 4:52:00 AM

Mohamed, thank you.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 2/13/2025 8:05:00 AM

I enjoy this senyru. It is mysterious.

Tania Kitchin
Date: 2/13/2025 7:19:00 PM

Hilda, thank you.

Alesia Leach

Date: 2/10/2025 2:18:00 PM

Your senryu is packed with mood and intrigue. “Darkly intoxicating” gives it a seductive, almost dangerous allure, and “a salacious treat” adds a playful, indulgent edge. Your senryu evokes desire and mystery in just a few words, which is the beauty of senryu—striking emotion and imagery with minimal space.

Tania Kitchin
Date: 2/11/2025 3:34:00 AM

Alesia, thank you.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/9/2025 10:56:00 PM

Oh and. POTD. Big congrats, Tanya

Tania Kitchin
Date: 2/10/2025 3:03:00 AM

Thank you.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/9/2025 10:55:00 PM

A yummy one !

Tania Kitchin
Date: 2/10/2025 3:03:00 AM

Andrea, thank you.

Len Gasun

Date: 2/9/2025 2:05:00 AM

An amazing valentines poem and treat my dear poet friend Tania. I immensely enjoyed it. So creative.Congratulations for the POTD! Thank you so much for sharing. God bless you always and your poetry. Best wishes always. Hugs

Tania Kitchin
Date: 2/9/2025 3:31:00 AM

Len, thank you.

Paige Hind

Date: 2/8/2025 5:22:00 PM

Very sensuous...chocolate is , too lol

Tania Kitchin
Date: 2/9/2025 3:33:00 AM

Paige, thank you.

Me Me

Date: 2/7/2025 9:00:00 PM

Reminds me of of a box of delicious decadent chocolate…Nice write

Tania Kitchin
Date: 2/8/2025 4:31:00 PM

Me me, thank you.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/7/2025 4:09:00 PM

Congrats on POTD!

Tania Kitchin
Date: 2/8/2025 4:31:00 PM

Kim, thank you.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

Date: 2/5/2025 10:49:00 AM

Love this. I partake in the dark salacious stuff regularly ;), Congratulations on POTD! xomo

Tania Kitchin
Date: 2/5/2025 7:22:00 PM

Mo, thank you.

thriveni c mysore

Date: 2/4/2025 9:42:00 PM

congratulations on POTD honor dear poet. Cheers!!!

Tania Kitchin
Date: 2/5/2025 3:24:00 AM

Thriveni, thank you.

Eve Roper

Date: 2/4/2025 8:00:00 PM

Back with congratulations on POTD.

Tania Kitchin
Date: 2/5/2025 3:24:00 AM

Eve, thank you.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 2/4/2025 2:50:00 PM

This is ' intoxicating,' indeed ! A sweet treat. Congratulations Tania, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Brandy

Tania Kitchin
Date: 2/4/2025 4:25:00 PM

Brandy, thank you.

Constance La France

Date: 2/4/2025 2:23:00 PM

Tania, wonderful poem and great example for your contest and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor ~

Tania Kitchin
Date: 2/4/2025 4:25:00 PM

Constance, thank you.

David Kavanagh

Date: 2/4/2025 10:20:00 AM

Congratulations Tania on a most decadent POTD, (getting in the mood) lol! Cheers David

Tania Kitchin
Date: 2/4/2025 4:25:00 PM

David, thank you.

John Read

Date: 2/4/2025 8:36:00 AM

Congratulations on your POTD Tania. xx

Tania Kitchin
Date: 2/4/2025 4:25:00 PM

John, thank you.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/4/2025 7:51:00 AM

Congratulations on your POTD win. "my valentine" is a lovely write. Three lines says it all. Hope you have a great Valentine’s Day. Have a fun day with your win as you write away..................

Tania Kitchin
Date: 2/4/2025 4:26:00 PM

Paula, thank you.