My Universe

Expanding with
perpetuity
of paradoxes
started from God or
a bang from a spark?

I come to grasp
we are on an
island in an
oasis of  

freewill and
spirited 
souls from seeds,

planted,
watered, 

grown.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 10/25/2010 10:11:00 AM
Congratulations Mike on your win in Rick's contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/17/2010 12:56:00 PM
Congratulations on this wonderful write, Mike
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Date: 9/17/2010 9:16:00 AM
A wonderful write, congratulations on your win. Caryl
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Date: 9/17/2010 7:54:00 AM
good one, congrats on your HM in the contest
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Date: 9/17/2010 6:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Mike in Rick Parise's contest "The Universe" Love, Carol
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Date: 9/17/2010 12:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest :) Wilma
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Date: 9/16/2010 3:28:00 PM
Congrats Mike on your HM in the Universe contest... a lovely piece.. enjoy your honor tonight with luv..
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Date: 9/16/2010 2:40:00 PM
Congrats on your success in the contest. BG
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Date: 9/16/2010 1:14:00 PM
Congratulation's Mike on your fine win in Rick's contest >> James
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Date: 9/16/2010 1:14:00 PM
Wow! This is quite a provocative write, Mike. Love the question you ask in the first verse and the way your explain your realization in the second. Excellent! Congratulations on your placement in Rick's contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/14/2010 10:54:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Mike. I am looking forward to tomorrow and what I might read of yours again. Never let your pen lay and dry out. The best to you in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/13/2010 11:20:00 PM
excellent, good luck with this. Harry
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Date: 9/13/2010 3:50:00 PM
creative.*
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