My Universe

Expanding with
perpetuity
of paradoxes
started from God or
a bang from a spark?

I come to grasp
we are on an
island in an
oasis of  

freewill and
spirited 
souls from seeds,

planted,
watered, 

grown.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
October 25, 2010 at 10:11 AM
Congratulations Mike on your win in Rick's contest. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
September 17, 2010 at 12:56 PM
Congratulations on this wonderful write, Mike
Muzzey Avatar
September 17, 2010 at 9:16 AM
A wonderful write, congratulations on your win. Caryl
Roberts Avatar
September 17, 2010 at 7:54 AM
good one, congrats on your HM in the contest
Brown Avatar
September 17, 2010 at 6:52 AM
Congratulations on your win Mike in Rick Parise's contest "The Universe" Love, Carol
Neels Avatar
September 17, 2010 at 12:50 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest :) Wilma
Sweetheart Avatar
September 16, 2010 at 3:28 PM
Congrats Mike on your HM in the Universe contest... a lovely piece.. enjoy your honor tonight with luv..
Gorelick Avatar
September 16, 2010 at 2:40 PM
Congrats on your success in the contest. BG
Fraser Avatar
September 16, 2010 at 1:14 PM
Congratulation's Mike on your fine win in Rick's contest >> James
Devonshire Avatar
September 16, 2010 at 1:14 PM
Wow! This is quite a provocative write, Mike. Love the question you ask in the first verse and the way your explain your realization in the second. Excellent! Congratulations on your placement in Rick's contest. Love, Carolyn
Brown Avatar
September 14, 2010 at 10:54 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Mike. I am looking forward to tomorrow and what I might read of yours again. Never let your pen lay and dry out. The best to you in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol
Horsman Avatar
September 13, 2010 at 11:20 PM
excellent, good luck with this. Harry
Korea Avatar
September 13, 2010 at 3:50 PM
creative.*
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