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My True Love

I lose all my words when you smile at me your passion and fire leaves me wanting more you are perfection true beauty I see my friendship and love will always be yours Excitement and joy prayers answered once more I'm happy to love and happy to live One heavenly night with whom I adore You bring out my best the best I can give I love you so much my path is now clear I lay at your feet the pieces and parts when you hold my hand I have no more fear forever I'm yours I give you my heart I lye hear with you God's gift from above I'm glad that you're here you are my true love

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Eve Roper

Date: 2/20/2020 9:15:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Mark, on romantic verse. Enjoyed reading. Hugs Eve

Mark Koplin
Date: 2/21/2020 8:09:00 AM

Thank you so much Eve! Have a beautiful day my friend.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/20/2020 9:59:00 AM

Congratulations on your wonderful win Mark!XXOO

Mark Koplin
Date: 2/20/2020 10:11:00 AM

Thank you Connie!

Alexis Y.

Date: 2/20/2020 8:08:00 AM

Hi Mark, You have penned such a beautiful write. Love was evident within your lines. Congratulations on your 2nd place win. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis

Mark Koplin
Date: 2/20/2020 9:24:00 AM

Thank you. I can't believe I placed with that. It's the first sonnet I've ever written.

John Gondolf

Date: 2/10/2020 7:31:00 AM

This is a sweet love sonnet, Mark, nicely done. Best of luck in the contest. John

Mark Koplin
Date: 2/10/2020 8:02:00 AM

Thanks again John. I appreciate that.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/9/2020 8:20:00 PM

This is beautiful romantic sonnet is written straight from the heart Mark. I hope you gave this to your lady, or perhaps you are saving it for Valentine's day? Any lady would be thrilled to receive this loving sonnet. If for the contest I hope to see it a top winner. Aloha, Connie xxoo

Mark Koplin
Date: 2/9/2020 9:21:00 PM

I struggle with these sonnets, I have a hard time making them sound good with limited syllables. I did write this for a contest. Thank you very much!