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My Top 10 Blessings List: (For the "top 10" Contest Sponsored By: Joe Flach)

1. LIFE: February (you can guess which year.) I came to earth as a little dear. After I wailed and cried a tear. My mother held me very near. 2. FAMILY: I did not come to earth alone. God sent me to my parent’s home. They kept me safe; they did not roam. Love took away my moan and groan. 3. FAITH: I felt God’s spirit as a child. He lingered with me mile after mile. Late teenage years were a little wild. When I made it through it, angels smiled. 4. EXPERIENCE: Hard-knocks were a real good teacher. (I should have listened to my childhood preacher.) At times my life had too many bloopers, But God stuck by me, the “party-pooper.” 5. EDUCATION: Learning helped increase my self worth. Esteem had been low since shortly after birth. When, I pondered the creation of Earth. God inspired thoughts seemed to have no girth. 6. FRIENDS: Blessed by people who crossed my path Sweetness understood every pain and wrath. The “past” lived forgiven without a bloodbath. Peace of mind cleansed in the aftermath. 7. ETERNAL LIFE: Oh precious gift to me from God. Led my heart directly to more righteous sod. Teachings transmitted by the Master’s rod Bless my life through each step I trod. 8. FORGIVENESS opened the way to spiritual re-birth. And filled my life with unending mirth. Forgiving others while upon this earth, I remember God’s command and Jesus’ great worth. 9. MY ETERNAL SOUL MATE knocked on my door one day. When we first met, I knew not what to say. I stared speechless at the blessing coming my way. Now, I thank God for Ingrid every time I pray. 10. EXALTATION is a blessing that I hope to earn. I accepted Christ my Savior, now my life I govern. Immortal life with Father, a consecrated sojourn. Honoring eternal life free from Hell’s fiery burn. © July 11, 2010 Dane Smith-Johnsen Poetic Form: List with momorhymes

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Date: 8/4/2010 11:17:00 AM
Dane Ann, an Excellent list superbly rhymed! So glad to see this poem in the winner's circle. Congratulations. Blessings, Connie
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Date: 8/1/2010 6:16:00 PM
What a neat approach you took . A big congratulations to you on your win. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 7/27/2010 6:58:00 AM
Congratulations Dane Ann on your win in Joe Flach's contest "Top 10". Love, Carol
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Date: 7/25/2010 3:34:00 PM
Dane, a very beautiful and creative poem. I loved the individual quatrains on each of the 10 blessings. Each stanza has a nice flow and easy beat all defining, in your terms, the particular blessing listed. Simply beautiful. Thank you for sharing this poem with me by entering it in my contest. Joe
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Date: 7/24/2010 9:37:00 AM
Wonderful write. Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C
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Date: 7/24/2010 9:02:00 AM
Congrats Dane Ann on your big win in the Top Ten contest.. with this super write and list of blessings.. so powerful.. enjoy my friend.. with luv..
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Date: 7/24/2010 6:57:00 AM
Congrats, Dane-Ann. Outstanding write. Kudos to you. Have a great weekend. xxxRalph
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Date: 7/12/2010 11:46:00 AM
I am enjoying reading everyone's poetry today Dane-Ann. I am so happy yours was amongest them. Hoping you have a wonderful week filled with good health and delightful inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/11/2010 6:26:00 PM
What a wondeful take on the contest. I can see it as a hand sticked "sampler"..Lovely..sop mail. BG
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Date: 7/11/2010 6:25:00 PM
Excelent choice of blessings and an amazing way to put it. I absolutely love this poem. Good luck in the contest. Loves Destiny
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Date: 7/11/2010 3:57:00 PM
PERFECTION!!! mail....
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Date: 7/11/2010 3:38:00 PM
Great theme for the contest...Good luck..Sara
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Date: 7/11/2010 1:12:00 PM
Wow....you fulfilled this request with a wonderful poem...plus monorhymes!! What an excellent poem, you could enter it in both contests Dane Ann...and would do so well!! Good luck! ~ Carrie
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Date: 7/11/2010 12:57:00 PM
Heartfelt. You should post this on the wall in youir den, or your bedroom. It has that feel to it and it IS your life. So, what's up? Are you okay? the 3 months soundedec like a bad time and like there was disease or death or such maledys. I hope that you are okay. I have always liked you and your perspective on here. Please be well. EReghards, Gerard. Write me on Soup Mail!
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