My tears

No one sees my tears poured into my words caught on paper trapped for eternity

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thriveni c mysore

Date: 9/16/2024 9:01:00 PM

you have written a beautiful poem dear poet, it is universal truth. whoever reads it feels the same, like truth, tears is universal, show me one who has never seen sadness.

Karen Croft
Date: 9/17/2024 2:04:00 AM

Thank you for reading and for feeling what the poem is saying.

Daisy Meadows

Date: 9/16/2024 2:15:00 AM

A good description of hidden tears. Well done.

Karen Croft
Date: 9/16/2024 4:58:00 AM

Thank you!

Ink Empress

Date: 9/15/2024 8:11:00 PM

Awwn dear karen, this is so emotive, sometimes we wish they would know or could see the emotions behind words woven. I love “ caught on paper” pleasure always reading your work. Sending you light always

Karen Croft
Date: 9/15/2024 8:21:00 PM

Thank you very much for reading and for appreciating my words.