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My Sweetheart Is Coming Back

the day you passed by my window a song of inspiration rang through you smiled and then paused your graceful movement was so true you winked and then a nod a true love was bestowed............right then , yes , I knew I remember that day so vivid , so clear , my loving truth I still sit at that window......... an incomplete picture of love hoping you will return in my dream...... where have you gone my sweet dove these years pass so slow I still hold out all hope a beautiful picture still awaits but for now, a lone flower , crushed you are still away................

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/21/2010 8:26:00 PM
I hope your waiting proves fruitful and your "sweet dove" returns, Rick. Such a lovely poem. All the entries are in for The Power in the Hands contest that you asked about. I don't think you entered this one, did you? Anyway, I'm giving folks until Wednesday (the original deadline) to edit and correct their poems before winners are posted. I have another one lined up to follow. Did I answer your question? Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/21/2010 6:15:00 PM
Nice write on unfulfilled yearning
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