My Sweet Indulgence

My sweet indulgence Left with nothing on my mind Just watching paint dry

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/13/2010 10:23:00 PM

YOu are on a roll, Wilma. I love this one too!!

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 9/13/2010 1:28:00 PM

Beautiful Senryu Wilma.. another work of art...Luv Michael

Daver Austin

Date: 9/12/2010 9:23:00 AM

Hey! This, "Just watching paint dry," can be wonderful. This is a SUPER piece of writing. Love, Dave

Thvia Shetley

Date: 9/12/2010 8:18:00 AM

oh what a treasure to have your mind free from worry or care long enough to appreciate your surroundings....

Susan Palli

Date: 9/12/2010 7:43:00 AM

Great one!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/11/2010 5:35:00 PM

Well penned Senryu with nice images, Wilma

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 9/11/2010 2:23:00 PM

Sweet-- you sure fooled me lol I thought this was about chocolates!! very nice-- and hmmm my Saturday was used up dilly dallying--what's new?? haha then I fell asleep at an odd hour again so woke up at odd hours again & I am still dilly dallying --crazy crazy me-- hope your saturday was more productive! ;)

Francine Roberts

Date: 9/11/2010 12:37:00 PM

love it

James Fraser

Date: 9/11/2010 11:36:00 AM

Kool Senyru Wilma, get over to the Highlands of Scotland. So much to see here, you'll never be bored > my Saturday is koolio, I trust yours is also >> James

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/11/2010 11:34:00 AM

a sweet write on the simplicity of a priceless moment to indulge on, enjoyed your write..P.D.