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My Sustenance

My name is Aphrodite and my offering to man is fierce love. I spread it out before you like a lavish bridegroom’s dinner with foods named aphrodisiacs rightly after me! Caviar, oysters and shrimp; spears of warmed asparagus and artichokes stripped of leaves to dip in luscious butter; truffles too with fragrant muskiness; all foods of succulence - to stimulate your appetite. My tender lips are moist - champagne to further whet desire. You drink me in. . . Entreating you to take your fill, I whisper in your ear, “Partake of me, my love. Take more and more.” When your feeding frenzy is at its peak - that’s when I offer you - dripping from my fingers - sweetest fruit: honeyed figs with cream, peaches, plums, and kumquats; and last: one red well-ripened berry. Utterly sated, drunk from delectation; motionless, you lie there on your bed. And when your eyes move rapidly beneath their heavy lids, I slide my body carefully off yours, slip back into my gossamer-thread gown, then tiptoe to the door; turn the knob; and without looking back, step into night. You waken and want to feast again but find that I have parted. (to banquets such as mine, one rarely is invited more than once). And so you live and love, knowing that you can’t resume - ever in your life again - a coupling so completely gratifying. Your passion was consumed in your consuming of this goddess! I take from men again . . .again. . . and then again. But the nourishment that I require always must be fresh, and that is what eternally sustains me. For Deb's Contest: category Unreal

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Date: 4/23/2011 10:57:00 AM
Congrats on your win in the contest.....Happy Easter to you......George
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Date: 4/22/2011 6:01:00 PM
I Know I've read this beauty before, so imagine my surprise to not see any comments from me here?? I honestly thought i commented here?? Sooo weird! especially because I know we both got HM's on Aphrodite before!!Anyhow, your win this time around is faar more deserving! Yes! A top 3 win for you! So super congrats to you sweetie, loved reading this before as I do now :) hugs to you !
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Date: 4/22/2011 9:46:00 AM
congrats on this winning beauty Andrea, it held me captive throughout, some very sensual images, a most unusual poem...
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Date: 4/21/2011 4:17:00 PM
Way to go Andrea, Congratulations on your success in the winner circle. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/21/2011 2:53:00 PM
The allure of this poem, seduces...and draws the reader in! Wow, Andrea....great job!
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Date: 4/21/2011 1:27:00 PM
marvellous, sexy, great poem... I was drooling as you talked of shrimp...my favorite...very vivid palpable images ...I read it twice slowly....wow
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Date: 4/21/2011 1:00:00 PM
Congratulations on the third place win in the contest, Andrea
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Date: 4/21/2011 12:07:00 PM
I agree with Chris. Many congrats, Andrea. Love, Lainie
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Date: 4/21/2011 11:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/21/2011 11:04:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Andrea!! Ellen <3
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Date: 4/21/2011 9:40:00 AM
Many congrats on your win, Andrea : )
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Date: 4/21/2011 7:21:00 AM
An amazing tale Andrea. You've outdone yourself this time. Many warm congrats for this terrific write
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Date: 4/21/2011 7:19:00 AM
Congrats Andrea on your stupendous win in Debbie's contest with this exceptional entry .. amazing words and wonderful win luv.. enjoy myfriend.. u deserve it..for quality poetry..
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Date: 8/12/2010 8:23:00 AM
Andrea, congratulations on your win in Amy Green's contest"Godesses of Glory For Women Only". Love, Carol
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Date: 8/10/2010 3:32:00 PM
great! congrats!
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Date: 8/7/2010 9:13:00 PM
congrats on your win in this challenging contest
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Date: 8/7/2010 9:10:00 PM
Congrats Andrea on your HM in Amy's part of the contest with this wonderful write on your goddess.. exquisite piece of work my friend.. enjoy your special honor..with luv..
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Date: 7/31/2010 12:24:00 PM
Brillant use of metaphor in this poem! Congratulations on winning the contest. T have been ill and just now have been able to get back to the Internet. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 7/30/2010 7:59:00 PM
This is very physical, sensual well done!
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Date: 7/30/2010 7:27:00 PM
This is wonderful Andrea, you captured the spirit of Aphrodite .. best of luck
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Date: 7/30/2010 3:31:00 PM
Andrea, Thanks your comments on My Aphrodite poem. You have offered a three course dinner and a desert. Part two and three of your poem brings us quite near in assessing Aphrodite. Wish you good luck in the contest.
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Date: 7/30/2010 2:27:00 PM
Superb! Woman is the feast and man is constantly hungry, never satisfied. And, oh yes, "Fixation" was for real. Love, Dave
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Date: 7/30/2010 1:00:00 PM
All I can say is WOW .. and WOW .. u brought this 'goddess' to life and Amy will enjoy and reward with a winners spot Andrea... very creative and imaginative too... u gave her a personality..that is exactly what we were looking for in our collab... good luck...my friend and happy weekend..with luv.
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Date: 7/30/2010 12:50:00 PM
Hi Sarah , Sorry Andrea LoL I am not the sharpest tool in the shed as you may guess 114 IS FOR YOU .Cheers
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Date: 7/30/2010 12:33:00 PM
Evening Andrea, Fresh and new i what i took from you. 133 is the amount of views Celene got on one of her poems that is what is behind 133 Cheers
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