My Sustenance

My name is Aphrodite and
my offering to man
is fierce love.
I spread it out before you
like a lavish bridegroom’s dinner
with foods named aphrodisiacs rightly after me!
Caviar, oysters and shrimp;
spears of warmed asparagus and
artichokes stripped of leaves to dip in luscious butter;
truffles too with fragrant muskiness;
all foods of succulence -  to stimulate your appetite.
My tender lips are moist - champagne to further whet desire.
You drink me in. . . 
Entreating you to take your fill, I whisper in your ear,
“Partake of me, my love. Take more and more.”

When your feeding frenzy 
 is at its peak -
that’s when I offer you - dripping from my fingers - sweetest fruit:
honeyed figs with cream, peaches, plums, and kumquats;
and last: one red well-ripened berry.

Utterly sated,
drunk from delectation;
motionless, you lie there on your bed.
And when your eyes move rapidly
beneath their heavy lids,
I slide my body carefully off yours,
slip back into my gossamer-thread gown, 
then tiptoe to the door; turn the knob;
and without looking back,
step into night.

You waken and want to feast again
but find that I have parted.
(to banquets such as mine, one rarely
is invited more than once).
And so you live and love,
knowing that you can’t resume -
ever in your life again -
a coupling so completely gratifying.
Your passion was consumed in
your consuming of this goddess!
I take from men again . . .again. . . 
and then again.
But the nourishment that I require
always must be fresh,
and that is what 
eternally
sustains me.

For Deb's Contest: category Unreal
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Aul Avatar
April 23, 2011 at 10:57 AM
Congrats on your win in the contest.....Happy Easter to you......George
K. Avatar
April 22, 2011 at 6:01 PM
I Know I've read this beauty before, so imagine my surprise to not see any comments from me here?? I honestly thought i commented here?? Sooo weird! especially because I know we both got HM's on Aphrodite before!!Anyhow, your win this time around is faar more deserving! Yes! A top 3 win for you! So super congrats to you sweetie, loved reading this before as I do now :) hugs to you !
Puddifoot Avatar
April 22, 2011 at 9:46 AM
congrats on this winning beauty Andrea, it held me captive throughout, some very sensual images, a most unusual poem...
Freeman Avatar
April 21, 2011 at 4:17 PM
Way to go Andrea, Congratulations on your success in the winner circle. Agape, Moses
Richards Avatar
April 21, 2011 at 2:53 PM
The allure of this poem, seduces...and draws the reader in! Wow, Andrea....great job!
Beck Avatar
April 21, 2011 at 1:27 PM
marvellous, sexy, great poem... I was drooling as you talked of shrimp...my favorite...very vivid palpable images ...I read it twice slowly....wow
Mehta Avatar
April 21, 2011 at 1:00 PM
Congratulations on the third place win in the contest, Andrea
George   Avatar
April 21, 2011 at 12:07 PM
I agree with Chris. Many congrats, Andrea. Love, Lainie
Brown Avatar
April 21, 2011 at 11:29 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest Andrea. Love, Carol
Fahey Avatar
April 21, 2011 at 11:04 AM
Congrats on your win, Andrea!! Ellen <3
Horne Avatar
April 21, 2011 at 9:40 AM
Many congrats on your win, Andrea : )
Mannan Avatar
April 21, 2011 at 7:21 AM
An amazing tale Andrea. You've outdone yourself this time. Many warm congrats for this terrific write
Sweetheart Avatar
April 21, 2011 at 7:19 AM
Congrats Andrea on your stupendous win in Debbie's contest with this exceptional entry .. amazing words and wonderful win luv.. enjoy myfriend.. u deserve it..for quality poetry..
Brown Avatar
August 12, 2010 at 8:23 AM
Andrea, congratulations on your win in Amy Green's contest"Godesses of Glory For Women Only". Love, Carol
Arteaga Avatar
August 10, 2010 at 3:32 PM
great! congrats!
Roberts Avatar
August 7, 2010 at 9:13 PM
congrats on your win in this challenging contest
Sweetheart Avatar
August 7, 2010 at 9:10 PM
Congrats Andrea on your HM in Amy's part of the contest with this wonderful write on your goddess.. exquisite piece of work my friend.. enjoy your special honor..with luv..
Anish Avatar
July 31, 2010 at 12:24 PM
Brillant use of metaphor in this poem! Congratulations on winning the contest. T have been ill and just now have been able to get back to the Internet. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
Byrne Avatar
July 30, 2010 at 7:59 PM
This is very physical, sensual well done!
La France Avatar
July 30, 2010 at 7:27 PM
This is wonderful Andrea, you captured the spirit of Aphrodite .. best of luck
Mehta Avatar
July 30, 2010 at 3:31 PM
Andrea, Thanks your comments on My Aphrodite poem. You have offered a three course dinner and a desert. Part two and three of your poem brings us quite near in assessing Aphrodite. Wish you good luck in the contest.
Austin Avatar
July 30, 2010 at 2:27 PM
Superb! Woman is the feast and man is constantly hungry, never satisfied. And, oh yes, "Fixation" was for real. Love, Dave
Sweetheart Avatar
July 30, 2010 at 1:00 PM
All I can say is WOW .. and WOW .. u brought this 'goddess' to life and Amy will enjoy and reward with a winners spot Andrea... very creative and imaginative too... u gave her a personality..that is exactly what we were looking for in our collab... good luck...my friend and happy weekend..with luv.
Flaherty Avatar
July 30, 2010 at 12:50 PM
Hi Sarah , Sorry Andrea LoL I am not the sharpest tool in the shed as you may guess 114 IS FOR YOU .Cheers
Flaherty Avatar
July 30, 2010 at 12:33 PM
Evening Andrea, Fresh and new i what i took from you. 133 is the amount of views Celene got on one of her poems that is what is behind 133 Cheers
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