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My Sunrise

Where we hail home, our native land The sun rises in the east Our harsh winters here Make the sun impossible to beam Come winter's end When everyone emerges To welcome in the spring The sunrise is brilliant From one extreme to the next Through winter's cold And spring's stare My sunrise is to remember Won 1st. place Contest Sunrise Vs. Sunset Sponsored by: H.Garvey Daniel Esquire Written by: Shannon Deane

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/17/2012 8:31:00 PM
'...spring's stare,' I love that phrase! Congratulations on first place... richly deserved! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 11/1/2011 3:37:00 PM
* “The Warmth of Her Breast Weighing Joyfully Within My Palms * I Thought That I Would Share With Your Inspiring Beauty * My Sweet Beautiful Shannon * A Verseful Line From My Next Poetic Post * Thank You * For All of Your Treasures Kind Coms * My Luv, Always * Sarah. *
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Date: 5/26/2011 6:23:00 PM
Shannon! A pleasure to see your poem honored in first place. Congratulations! Agape, Moses
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Date: 5/26/2011 12:09:00 PM
Congrats:)
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Date: 5/26/2011 3:11:00 AM
Well done Shannon notching up 1st spot with this beautiful entry in HG's contest. Luv & Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 5/25/2011 6:08:00 PM
Congrats Shannon on your first place win in this contest by HG.. lovely scene painted in words.. enjoy your top spot with luv...
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Date: 5/25/2011 2:32:00 PM
Congrad's on your fine write winning. Light & Love
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Date: 5/25/2011 2:08:00 PM
Creative one..Congratulations..Sara
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Date: 5/25/2011 12:00:00 PM
Congratulations on the first place win in the contest, Shannon
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Date: 5/25/2011 10:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in HG's contest Shannon. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/25/2011 7:21:00 AM
Just beautiful!! Congratulations Shannon! to a well deserved winner!
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Date: 5/10/2011 10:29:00 AM
Quite a sunrise Shannon. They are so beautiful, good luck in HG's fine contest....:)
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Date: 5/10/2011 10:23:00 AM
Dear Shannon, Thank-YOU for YOUR support, in my Contest " Sunrise - verses - Sunset I must say this is very well Written With all the Entrees i have recieve so far I want to Congratulate YOU for a 1st Place WIN YOUR Liege With LOVE ALWAYS...HG
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