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Celestial jewel of eye delight treasure from God Who grants faith’s sight beauteously radiant, ceaselessly bright firmament wonder driving astronomic flight galaxy ornament mystifying constellation gazers’ might such is my stellar power, reaching from outer space height --- --- illumining your poetic muse against visual blight! As a great light* with valued luminescence star am I affecting solar system’s iridescence created out of the Lord’s omnipotence and omniscience from me plants get chlorophyll for nutritious essence being the sun: electricity source, force of industrial excellence… such is my triumphant solar experience midst life rays' influence --- --- sharing with you heaven’s opulence!
*Genesis 1:16 And God made two great lights; the greater light to rule the day, and the lesser light to rule the night: he made the stars also. July 7, 2020 3rd place, "Second Chances NA poems of 2020 Part III" Contest Sponsored by Chantelle Anne Cooke; judged on 10/6/2020.

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Date: 10/7/2020 12:35:00 PM
Beata, congratulations on your win. I really like the perspective of the poem told from the star's viewpoint all woven seamlessly into the verse from Genesis. Well done my friend. Sending you starlit blessings.
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Date: 10/6/2020 9:35:00 PM
Thank you for sharing heaven's opulence, Beata! Congratulations for your podium win with all your God-honoring celestial imagery.
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Date: 10/6/2020 4:06:00 PM
Beata, your poem surely transcends several of the listed 'Star' poem winners. It is very significant, felt from within and radiates brightly. It is sometimes the way, - judges expect a very literal depiction of the Contest topic. I feel your admiration for God and his splendour in your life. Congratulations! - splendid poem, worthy Win today!!
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Date: 7/6/2020 6:50:00 AM
A heavenly delight that provides insight into the Creator’s muse when creating. God bless you always, dear friend. Your words inspire me to create!
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