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My Song- (Solfège)

Do- Re- Mi- Do..Dodo flightless bird fearless of humans; easy prey! Extinct so long many believe you a myth.... Re master of universe mirror image of Ra...worshiped by millions seeking a ray of hope.. a ray of sunshine warming heart and soul... Mi.. Mi.. ME Calm me.. breath..deeply breath.. help me.. bless me.. sing my song.. Do - Re- Mi- Fa- So- La- Fa away from everything; everyone I love.. wishing.. dreaming.. desolate.. So- so- Sewing Grandma's old sewing machine.. bright colors.. tiny stitches.. warm quilts... So- so- Sew! La- La- La- Sadness.. Dark.. gloomy.. overwhelmed.. lonely.. Tears.. La-La-La-...LA! LA! LA! La- Ti- Do- ti-Ti- piercing.. Heart weary.. Ti.. Ti.. Tea! a hot cup with lemon and honey.. faith....hope.. a ray.. Do- stronger now! Do- Do- Do what you have to! find strength.. it's there..deep inside you.. survive! grow! learn! LIVE!! do- re-mi-fa-so-la-ti-do... DO- RE- MI- Fa-So- La- ti- do!

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Date: 8/14/2009 9:42:00 PM
Patricia this was excellent - Congrats on Placing in the contest - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 8/14/2009 8:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Izzy's contest Patricia. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/13/2009 1:27:00 PM
I loved how you wrote your poem and I think as you got further and further into it, it got increasingly better. Congratulations on your win in this contest.
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Date: 8/13/2009 1:10:00 PM
Wonderful job with the choice of words in this beautiful clever poem! Congratulations on your winning entry! ~ Carrie
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Date: 8/13/2009 1:04:00 PM
Creative poem. Congratulations on being one of the contest winners. Enjoy your honor! Keep on writing. Karen
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Date: 8/13/2009 9:27:00 AM
This is a winner! Congratulations on your placement in the solfege poetry contest, Patricia. Lovingly, DAS-J
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Date: 7/29/2009 3:23:00 AM
Patricia, it was a pleasure to read your excellent poem. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/27/2009 10:27:00 PM
You sing your song so well , Patricia . This one is ,so difficult and unusal and like Barbara , I also gave up . Well done .....
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Date: 7/27/2009 7:43:00 PM
I have been struggleing with this challenge and finally gave up. You did a great job. La-ti-DO. BG
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Date: 7/27/2009 4:21:00 PM
This was the most challenging contest! You did a terrific job!! Great work!
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