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My Silent Cry

The tears fall without landing they come from within...a sadder truth held by my exhausted heart, alone and confused searching for answers, not knowing the right questions as I stumble through my mind wanting dreams that once flourished to appear again finding instead an empty desert of dark gray where I'm wrapped in the trappings of sadness that flutter around me from the cold winds of torment which cause me to lay down...listen to the blue music pouring through my soul and embrace the rise of loneliness as it washes over me with the first note from a sad violin 1/8/19 Blue Poetry Contest

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Date: 1/14/2019 10:59:00 PM
This is so lovely Frederic! Congratulations on your placement in the contest. : )
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Date: 1/13/2019 8:24:00 AM
That is so true of "the emotional blues" Frederic because it's an inward sadness that is, as you allude...lonely and sad and on that edge of depression but more "knowing" and drawn out, as you say, by that haunting bow on the string---love that ending--great stuff!
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Date: 1/11/2019 6:13:00 PM
I'll be back Frederic
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Date: 1/11/2019 4:40:00 PM
Congratulations for your win Frederic :)
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Date: 1/11/2019 3:44:00 PM
such a touching poem Frederic I especially love the melancholy music related imagery i can almost hear that weeping violin , congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/11/2019 3:34:00 PM
Beautiful, Frederic. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 1/11/2019 2:31:00 PM
Very touching poem, Frederic. Congratulations on your win in Craig's contest. Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 1/9/2019 8:47:00 PM
Such an emotive, sad and blue write, but beautifully executed! Good luck in the contest, Frederic! :)
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Date: 1/8/2019 6:02:00 PM
Beautifully written Frederic. I feel the sadness, the loneliness. Take care :)
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